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for Hiss and Kiss

by Jelp

schedule May 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
*happy sigh* Dude, what is it with you and being able to pull ideas out of your head that keep me happy? lol It doesn't matter if the stories are old or not! I would LOVE to see more work from you! For now, I think I'll wander off to your profile and see what else you've got. :-D
person Timber
schedule August 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chap. 3
I tried to locate the other story but didn't see it....has it been removed or moved to a new location?
Is Sasuke a person only in Naruto's mind, a ghost, a spirit of some sort....or something else???
person Timber
schedule August 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hiss and Kiss 1
This is so EROTIC!!! SEXY and HOT enough to melt my computer and its only the first page!!! Quickly fans self and tries to remember how to breath!!!
person moodysavage
schedule August 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
oh my gosh that was so hot...(fanning self)...whoo hoo that was hot. totally loved this!!!!!!!! I am SO glad you finished this. whooo!
person KatieKat
schedule July 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
THAT was hot! And so cleverly planned. lol I loved the part about the parked car. I had to stop myself from laughing too loud, because I read this at work. lol
person Talltree-san
schedule July 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh so Sasuke has a key to Naruto's dorm room. That explains how he keeps getting in there.
schedule July 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Jelp, honey,, I love you. I REEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEALY love you. I do.

But I love you more when you don't confuse the hell out of me.

That is all.
person Carousel
schedule July 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was an epic ending. A locksmith, huh? too clever.


I WISH I was going to Otakon. Have fun there!
schedule July 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh how great it feels to finally get closure!! *happy* So THAT'S what sasuke really does huh? the smug bastard! lol.. I liked how you summed everything up. Sasuke is one of the most horny characters I've seen in fanfiction O_O :D
person Kurisu
schedule July 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I've been checking everyday for this to be posted and I loved it! Great super sexy story! And another Yay! for Otakon this weekend! I go every year and its always a fantastic time! gonna do Yuuki from vampire knight this year..should be interesting. but Enjoy! and I cant wait to read your next piece!