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for Hiss and Kiss

by Jelp

person Carousel
schedule July 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Sasuke is INSANE. XD Hot chapter, I loved it, but this is getting sooooooo insane.XD
schedule July 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Come on, Jelp. What the hell?
person moodysavage
schedule July 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is SOOO good! At first I thought Sasuke might be some kind of succubus demon and he couldn't actually have sex with Naruto. But he gave hostile looks since the beginning and seems to just attack Naruto because he can't help himself. I think they knew each other from a LONG time ago and Naruto & Sasuke probably made some childhood promises to each other that Naruto totally forgot. Naruto probably moved away & didn't keep in touch. Airhead. But about the clothes & getting in his room... stalker yes but makes me think Sasuke isn't quite what he seems to be. Arrrggg... I want to know!!!!
schedule July 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, I'm guessing Naruto has had some type of trauma that caused him to temporally or permanently forget what happened between him and Sasuke. Something also tells me Sasuke's family plays a part in this or something to do with the fact that Sasuke is an Uchiha, after all, why would Sasuke react the way he did when Naruto questioned what Sasuke's last name was? Hmm, many possibilities and I suppose I and others won't officially know until more chapters are released. Good story, Jelp! I'm hooked once again! ^_^
person Macy
schedule July 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
What is going on!? Lol. I am so curious and the chapters are so hot. I like it!
schedule July 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yes!! They finally had sex, but other than that.. man oh man am I confused! I don't know what the hell is going on!!?? how did he know sasuke? were they together when they were young? good friends maybe? prob in another life? I'm grabbing at straws here! I wanna know!! Oh and thank you jelp for updating so quickly :D
schedule July 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This mystery is getting stranger and stranger by the chapter. And I can't come up with and Ideas for what's going on here! Well, I can't wait for more! Until then, Ja!
schedule July 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
God this is getting steamy! More please! ^_^
person Carousel
schedule July 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is hot and brilliant and yes. =] More please. And I love how creepy Sasuke is.It's pretty hot.
person Oneide
schedule July 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really envy you you know... you write really well. I love your stories and this one i had already read the first chapter thinking that I liked it and was well onto chapter two before I even realised it was one of your stories. love it!