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by EvilAnge1

person yumenohime-sama
schedule June 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Please continue this soon! I wonder what will happen next. I hope to see the council and ANBU being punished severely. heheh...
person kayci
schedule May 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I love this story and the way that you brought sasuke home. I cant wait to see how granny, sasuke, and gaara deal with the council. Or what sasukes punishment from naruto will be. Please update soon
schedule May 4, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I have really enjoyed reading this story, and I can't wait to read what Sasuke's punishment well be:)
person Miichu
schedule August 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is such a awesome story I hope you keep going!, maybe he could be tied to naruto for 2 weeks :p haha
person NightStar
schedule May 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Great story i love it it was sad what naruto went through but all his friends are there for him with kyuubi and sasuke i cant want to find what happens to the councils :)
person Freak joy spastic
schedule November 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, it needs to be a good punishment... >|3 hehehe He should make Sasuke suffer, but the whole punishment* through the denial of sex is just not right for this fic. Besides Sasuke already knows he has to tread carefully and wait patiently in regards to that. So, the punishment* should be more productive and goal oriented. Perhaps a series of challenges or difficult tasks that he must accomplish that are given to him by each of Naruto's friends. Honestly, Sasuke has kinda gotten off easy with them thus far. The tasks/challenges could be as simple as helping catalog items at a storage building, helping out with arranging flowers or making deliveries at Ino's families flower shop, or difficult in the sense that he has to build something from scratch or make a special gift for Naruto. The tasks/challenges should be something that make him work hard and learn some type of lesson about responsibility and the consideration of others. Utlimately, the tasks/challenges should take a few months to complete and in the mean time Naruto can make some hadway with his issues so that he feels more comfortable and confident in sharing his body with Sasuke again. The reward for completing these tasks/challenges should be something like Sasuke finally being allowed to make love to Naruto, not before. Sorry for not being very specific, but hopefully this helps! X)
person smint45
schedule October 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh my that last chappy was just amazing!!! I really like the way the story is going!!! About the punishment... narutos idea of life long Ramen would be really funny or something like sasuke only going on missions with him^^ altough that wouldn't be a real punishment in Sasukes opinion^^Otherwise I have no idea^^ I'm interestet in what you come up with^^see you again soon!!!
schedule July 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
love it!!
cried when I thought Naruto had died :(
person Shannon
schedule July 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Well, I don't really have that much advice for the punishment other than house arrest. I don't know if you should add on more than that (I probably think so...), but that's basically the only idea I have. Maybe an amount of time with chakra restraints? Or a guard - that guard being Naruto ;)

Anyways - great job with this! I really, really, REALLY like it! :D
person ash
schedule July 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
welll punisment could be making him carry the child since it is mpreg lol or um servent though hed do it anyway umm oh clean out a dog house like 17 of them lol cause he make naruto feel shity lol hope that helps