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It's very creative but also seems amateur. Your writing technique involves pointing out the obvious or ommitting facts. Like character facts. It's OOC so you should label that.
Sasuke would never act like that. He's a self-righteous ass hole with two things on his mind and one of them he tries to fight, FOREVER.
Tsunade knows who he is and he is an outlaw. He's a criminal. She wouldn't be cordial with him, unless it was for Naruto's sake.
The chakra supressing chains can't handle the Kyuubi's power. He can easily over power them if he is angry enough.
IDK it's the little things, and big, that really stick out and bug readers who are familiar with the storyline/characters.
Just research a bit next time when writing with a widely known ship and show. :)

I like Nefra's idea of Naruto's punishment for Sasuke being that Sasuke has to teach at the academy for a year. That can take place after the judgement and punishment is anounced to the village and then carried out by everyone. I can't wait to see the punishments that Gaara and Sasuke dish out, as well as the punishments from everyone else. This is a great story and I can't wait untill you update!

Wow, this story is great, I can't wait to see whats going to happen next, please update chapter 11 soon ^_^

First I want to say that I absolutely love this story. I've been following it since you started and was happy to see this latest chapter; I've fallen a bit behind on my reading as you can tell. LOL! You said you were stuck as to what Naruto's punishment for Sasuke would be and I came up with an idea that I think would not only annoy Sasuke but give Naruto a bit of amusement as well. Why don't you have Naruto's punishment be for Sasuke to teach a year at the academy? While Sasuke has patience with Naruto that probably would not extend to children, especially unruly ones that can't throw a kunai to save their lives *insert evil grin here*. It would not only keep Sasuke in the village for a longer period, Naruto could probably get the kids to prank Sasuke on a regular basis; all in good fun of course. Anyway, it's an idea that you may or may not want to use but it would sure be fun to read. Keep writing and I will eagerly await your update.

Ja ne!

Nefra

this is a really good story and i would love to be able to read more (P.S. if i've already reveiwed sorry but i love to reread my favorite stories)

oh that was great!!!

Pure love for little Fox-Face (stupid name my little sister calls him, she's only five though...)
I just wanna HUG 'IM!!!!

Write more soon? *does baby-eyes* Pweeease?? *glomps you to ground* PLWEEEASE!!!!!!!!!!!????????????

You- *backs away slowly*

YAY!!!! Naruto's awake!!! WOOT!!!! Please update soon!!! I still wanna know how Sasuke gets to punish those assholes for what they did!!!

awesome aweesome story.... i cant wait to see what happens to the ones that hurt naruto.... please hurry and update as soon as you can

Awe that was so great!!!! Finally he wakes up and can get a little loving or a lot loving ^^I want more !!! See you soon!!!