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October 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
this chapt was awesome! i kinda like it when sasuke gets all emotional. ;-) can wait to see the punsihment for the evildoers.
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October 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Excellent work! Cannot wait until the ANBU and Council members are punished haha!
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October 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Aww, how cute. I love it! Can't wait for the next one. =)
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October 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was wonderful!!!! Thank you so much for finally updating!!! I can't wait for Naruto to wake up and for Sasuke to start mending his mental wounds!!!!! Hope to hear from you again soon!!!
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September 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG OMG OMG! This story is amazing!!! When i read the forced bj chapter i was so angry. I was like, " Let me into the story so Sasuke can go to the hospital and i can kick that ANBU's sorry ass into the next eternity!" PLEASE update soon!
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September 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I just made an account on here so yeah. (sorry for that unrelated note...) Your fanfic is good. I like how it started off and you're keeping me on edge with that cliffhanger. Well, good job! ^_^
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September 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Aww, Sasuke's so sweet when it comes to Naruto... good job. ^^
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August 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ok so the torture was really terribel!!! Poor naruto I really pitty him!!!! But the rescue I loved it!!! I'm really going to kill you if you kill Naruto off just like that after they finally found eachother!!!! I hope some med is near by to help him!!!!! Wonderful Chappie see you soon!!!
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August 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I wrote this last night but my computer wiped it.
I have a way Tsunade and Gaara can get back at the council.
They can reveal what they know and say that they are going to get them for their crimes. When the council deny anything Tsunade can say they are accused of treason.
How you say, point 1-Gaara has adopted Naruto as his brother, therefore by abusing and torturing Naruto they have attacked an citizen of Suna-therefore treason and they are, according to the treaty with Leaf, handed over for punishment to Gaara. One look at Gaara they cringe.
Point 2-as an citizen of Suna living in Leaf, Naruto is considered an Emissary of Suna, therefore punishable by Leaf,or Suna.
Point 3-as members of Leaf abusing fellow members they are also punishable.
They have the choice, they can go with Gaara and take HIS punishment or if they take Leaf's punishment willingly then Tsunade WILL BE MERCIFUL.
Looking at Gaara's look get what they choose?
Tsunade says the condition of not handing them over to Suna is they have to reveal ALL ANBU spies and working for them and formally announce their retirement and crimes to the entire village during an live trial in the village.
They do this (this is necessary to show the village what happens when they 'go behind the Hokage's back'. Also to show that if you move against Naruto, Gaara and Suna will be your punishment)to put 'the fear of god' into the villagers but when Tsunade passes judgment is the real revenge. "I sentence you to suffer the exact same torture you visited on my Gaka. Every cut that was his, will now be yours. Every bruise is yours to enjoy, Ibiki, take them away."
Knowing they will never live through what they've done to Naruto, the council protest, scream and curse while faithful ANBU and Ibiki drag them away and when one cries out that Tsunade said she'd be merciful she answers with "I am and will. This IS me being Merciful. Do you think Gaara and Suna-who love the boy-would be any more merciful?"
One look at Gaara and they shut up.
This way when Naruto comes out of his coma (they can save his life, but because of all the damage, Kyuubi has to send him into an temporary coma so he can fully concentrate on healing him without any distraction) Sasuke can tell him that the council will never harm or threaten him again, because one by one they are being tortured to death.
I have a way Tsunade and Gaara can get back at the council.
They can reveal what they know and say that they are going to get them for their crimes. When the council deny anything Tsunade can say they are accused of treason.
How you say, point 1-Gaara has adopted Naruto as his brother, therefore by abusing and torturing Naruto they have attacked an citizen of Suna-therefore treason and they are, according to the treaty with Leaf, handed over for punishment to Gaara. One look at Gaara they cringe.
Point 2-as an citizen of Suna living in Leaf, Naruto is considered an Emissary of Suna, therefore punishable by Leaf,or Suna.
Point 3-as members of Leaf abusing fellow members they are also punishable.
They have the choice, they can go with Gaara and take HIS punishment or if they take Leaf's punishment willingly then Tsunade WILL BE MERCIFUL.
Looking at Gaara's look get what they choose?
Tsunade says the condition of not handing them over to Suna is they have to reveal ALL ANBU spies and working for them and formally announce their retirement and crimes to the entire village during an live trial in the village.
They do this (this is necessary to show the village what happens when they 'go behind the Hokage's back'. Also to show that if you move against Naruto, Gaara and Suna will be your punishment)to put 'the fear of god' into the villagers but when Tsunade passes judgment is the real revenge. "I sentence you to suffer the exact same torture you visited on my Gaka. Every cut that was his, will now be yours. Every bruise is yours to enjoy, Ibiki, take them away."
Knowing they will never live through what they've done to Naruto, the council protest, scream and curse while faithful ANBU and Ibiki drag them away and when one cries out that Tsunade said she'd be merciful she answers with "I am and will. This IS me being Merciful. Do you think Gaara and Suna-who love the boy-would be any more merciful?"
One look at Gaara and they shut up.
This way when Naruto comes out of his coma (they can save his life, but because of all the damage, Kyuubi has to send him into an temporary coma so he can fully concentrate on healing him without any distraction) Sasuke can tell him that the council will never harm or threaten him again, because one by one they are being tortured to death.
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August 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chap. 5
CRY!!!! That was heartbreaking and such a tear jerker!! Plus the frustration of wanting to see that guy get the hell beat out of him and see him get tortured slowly over time!!! Each of Naruto's friends should get a crack at each of the ones responsible for Naruto's treatment and use their own special skills on them!!! Ya...deep in thought....that would be great....:) ...hehe
CRY!!!! That was heartbreaking and such a tear jerker!! Plus the frustration of wanting to see that guy get the hell beat out of him and see him get tortured slowly over time!!! Each of Naruto's friends should get a crack at each of the ones responsible for Naruto's treatment and use their own special skills on them!!! Ya...deep in thought....that would be great....:) ...hehe