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August 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was absoloutly fantastic!!!! I really hope they will make it in time!!!! I can't wait for the next chappie!!!! Please update soon!!!!
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August 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
loving it!!! please post another chapter soon
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August 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very good story! You sucked me in please update soon
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July 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really like this so far I hope to see more soon .
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July 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I.... absolutely... ADORE it!!!
I like what you did with Sasuke's character. Sort of harsh, but with the soft gooey center :D hehe
Please keep up the awsome job!! *gives you a cookie*
I like what you did with Sasuke's character. Sort of harsh, but with the soft gooey center :D hehe
Please keep up the awsome job!! *gives you a cookie*
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July 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
thanks for updating!
wow! finally sasuke is home.. i hope that he will be able to find naruto before its too late..
please update soon
wow! finally sasuke is home.. i hope that he will be able to find naruto before its too late..
please update soon
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July 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
not bad a little ruff in places and many miss spelled words in both parts im not so good at fixing stuff like that but i can say its pretty good keep working on it
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July 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great!!! Sasuke is back!!!! He has to seve naruto form this evil bastards!!!! Please hurry Sasuke!!!! I hope he can find him fast!!!! See you again!!!
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July 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Even if Sasuke finds Naruto it will not necessarily help. I mean because of using Sasuke as an link to reality Naruto is actually fading from the real world. The obsession with Sasuke and him rescuing him has become an another reality entirely to Naruto. Even if he rescues him, the fun-looking happy Naruto will never come back.
Even if he rescues him, when Naruto sees him it will snap him back to reality and because of the trauma he suffered he will either retreat into his own head, suffer and horrendous emotional break down or became emotionally unstable, lashing out over any touch and contact. Tsunade's healing won't help with the emotional damage, only physical.
I suggest Sasuke isolating Naruto in the Uchiha compound and trying to soothe and nourcher him slowly to slowly accept touch until he can accept help from Tsunade or others.
They could even move to Suna to protect Naruto from the council.
Even if he rescues him, when Naruto sees him it will snap him back to reality and because of the trauma he suffered he will either retreat into his own head, suffer and horrendous emotional break down or became emotionally unstable, lashing out over any touch and contact. Tsunade's healing won't help with the emotional damage, only physical.
I suggest Sasuke isolating Naruto in the Uchiha compound and trying to soothe and nourcher him slowly to slowly accept touch until he can accept help from Tsunade or others.
They could even move to Suna to protect Naruto from the council.
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July 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really like the story so far, you're doing an awesome job! Can't wait for the next chapter!