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by NinjaToadsAteMyBaby

person Nibiki
schedule November 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I know you wrote this awhile ago but would you maybe write a sequel to this story? I'd love to read the"discussion" between Itachi and Sasuke about the warnings he gave Naruto.I'd love to see Itachi apologizing to the blonde. Heh, Itachi asking for forgiveness from Naruto tickles me pink.
person Anon
schedule November 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Love this!
person Pinsiechan
schedule October 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I'm just finding you now and I hope I'm not to late but I love your stories and would hate to see you stop writing
person Anon
schedule September 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is really good I love this parring
schedule July 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
awww... that was so cute!!!
person Arie Date
schedule March 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is such an awesome fic!! I mean I read Why Orange? over on FF before you removed it but I'm loving the way your writing style has gotten so much better. Your words flow much smoother and there aren't so many jumps in thought anymore. I give you supreme kudos for how much you've grown in so short a time. Only a few years and you've come this far. Major applause.
person smint45
schedule October 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was really great!!! I totally loved it!!!! Thank you soo much!!!! I love it how sas defended Naruto!!!!! Totally awesome!!! Thanks!!!!
schedule September 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
to your question in the authors notes... Its not. Seriously. Still very much quality here,.
schedule July 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this story and I would love to see chapter two where Itachi has to learn to deal with Sasuke moving in with Naruto. I also liked how you did the love scene very hot.
person Anon
schedule July 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Don't worry at all. Your work isn't getting bad. This was a great story and I hope you continue to write even more. Good job!