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for If You Love Until It Hurts

by gingermaya

person whenlovegoes
schedule July 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Love it!!! poor kakashi , I feel for him. please give me more soon, I wanna know what will happen:)
person satterb
schedule July 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I appreciate the way you flesh your characters out so completely before getting to the meat of the story. Sure you pretty much keep everyone in their natural character, but you always go the extra mile to allow us to somehow "feel" what makes the characters act the way they do. I love this story, and I can't wait to see more. Thanks for all your hard work.
person Carousel
schedule July 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This was amazing and so sad. Kakashi's process for cutting himself though is quite sanitary, which I approve of in an odd creepy manner. I love how you described his feelings, his pain. It was deep and raw, bringing the character to life. I can't wait for more so please update soon. =] And I love the Sensei-complex, btw.
person satterb
schedule July 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
beautiful...wonderful...perfect...great! I hope you add more to this soon. I've never had any experience with this kind of self abuse, (personally or through someone else) but you're not glorifying it. Kakashi is such a sad person. I can't wait to see where this goes. Thanks for the new story. Love ya!