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July 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very Good I like this story willthere be more I like it as is but it might be cool to see more.
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July 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Not bad, and I do like this pairing but never see it. Looking forward to this next chapter. ^.^
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July 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh come on!!!!!!!! You CAN"T make this just a one shot!!!!! There needs to be a whole lot more and a good rough lemon between naruto and pein!!!!! Or at least I think so!!! LOVED IT!!!!!!!!
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July 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG? WTH? Where's the rest of it? *shakes the story in hopes of seeing more words falling out of the chapter*
That was too cute for words. I wish there was more of this. This is my first ever Pein and Naruto story and I really like it. Please I know I'm not the only one who wants you to continue. I have for the past ten minutes tried to picture Pein with lion ears and tale and it's hot and I want to see more. Him finally claiming the blonde, whether the villagers would back off or continue to talk. What creatures are they really to want to mate like that since it's obvious they are part animal.
Tis awesome and an awesome story like this should continue.I'm glad he's not alone but I want more back story... more Pein with Narut... just plain more.
So please... pretty please, with sugar on top. *gives you puppy dog eyes of doom* I'll take every week for an update v.v
That was too cute for words. I wish there was more of this. This is my first ever Pein and Naruto story and I really like it. Please I know I'm not the only one who wants you to continue. I have for the past ten minutes tried to picture Pein with lion ears and tale and it's hot and I want to see more. Him finally claiming the blonde, whether the villagers would back off or continue to talk. What creatures are they really to want to mate like that since it's obvious they are part animal.
Tis awesome and an awesome story like this should continue.I'm glad he's not alone but I want more back story... more Pein with Narut... just plain more.
So please... pretty please, with sugar on top. *gives you puppy dog eyes of doom* I'll take every week for an update v.v
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July 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
PPPLLLLEEEAASSSEEE give me more....this story is a great start and I can't wait to read more of it.
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July 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is so cute. are you going to add chapts to this. I want more.
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July 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is good. I really like it and it needs a few more chapters and definitely a lemon.
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July 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
No! That can't be the end, just when it was getting good. Please let there be more chapters!
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July 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Please tell me there's going to be more! I love this, I hope you add more chapters, this is really good! There's not enough Pein/Naruto fics, you did an excellent job with this story.
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July 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is great i hope you add more.