rate_review Reviews

WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!! It was one of the best stories I read here so far - and when it comes to short stories (few chapters) definitely the best one. The way you depicted Naruto and Sasuke is beyond I would ever imagine - but it just fits. Although it seems "mad" to make Naruto evil... It's much more credible than most popular romantic, fluff stories... I definitely wouldn't say this story is "cute" (like someone in previous comments). It aspires to be a drama like original Naruto does (when you read manga and notice more than cool fights and jokes from anime). It's intense, it deals with important matters like love, death, right, wrong. In that way your imagination matches the original Naruto the most. You've captured the inexplicable bond that Naruto shares with Sasuke and the physical aspects of it. I can see this outcome you came up with when I recall all their fights, the intense look in Sasukes eyes after the fight in the Valley of the end, the opening when Naruto plunges into the darkness of water to chase Sasuke, the natural joy there share fighting together in most recent chapters... PS. The sex scenes ware so hot ^^ Keep up the good work - hope you will get even better, can't wait for next stories!

I loved it! It's a whole new world... of darkness. Very intense. !!!

Sweeter than I thought it would be but it was definitely amazing. We all have our reasons for liking this pairing but you just put it so well. Also, my favourite line out of everything I've read by you so far was the "I killed every single one of them [those Naruto fucked each time he couldn't get Sasuke]". Despite being incredibly violent, the confession was almost unbeaeingly sweet and possessive. I'm sure it will keep me smiling for days to.come.

Awwww! So cute! To be honest, When I read your authors note in the second chapter, I started to look for the one-shot to understand the story. I couldn't find it and then read the authors note in the first chapter. *laughs* Kinda stupid right? Reading the second authors note before the first.

Still I love this story and love Dark Naruto! You did a wonderful job and I am so happy to have read it.

Wish there was more to this, this was really good lol

I loved this.

Keep up the great work!

Very beautiful. Well written and such a pretty display is detail. Artistry at it's best.

I really love your dark, vicious, passionate Naruto and how by the end it really doesn't feel like they are evil, despite their actions.
Great conclusion and an amazing story.

ABSOLUTELY INCREDIBLE. I LOVED EVERY BIT OF IT. This is by far one of the best stories i have read in a very very very long time. Seriously, the sheer unbridled attention to Naruto's personality is meticulous and simple at the same time. He is amazing. I must admit i have never learned to that side of Naruto's personality but the way you created it was unlike anything i have ever seen before. But it fit Naruto so well. It was breathtaking. Then there was Sasuke. His pure malevolence and control over Naruto was so unique. Most would say he has always had that control, but the way you spun it making it seem so tangible in the way they spoke to one another and the way Sasuke put Naruto in his place no matter what was remarkable.

Not to mention the passion between Naruto and Sasuke was dizzying and so enthralling. I swear those lemons had me shifting in my seat and envying their need for one another. The way they seemed to fit, the way they recognized one another so carefully, so quickly, i can't tell you how beautiful that was.

The ending was nice as well, although i do like Suigetsu but i suppose this was a better ending for him. Better death than suffering without someone he loved. But the part where you reflected on what Naruto thought of himself, the way he suddenly went from being a child who looked for the approval of others to a man who knew where he belonged, where he was needed, sheer genius.

I can't tell you how wonderful this fic was. I bow to your mastery.

Yuri

I could Totally see the manga going on like this! I love your view and continuation. My mind always wondered how it would really be, when Sasuke has accomplished all he has and they have to face off each other.

Thanks for the great story, as always.