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for A World Gone Mad

by Daydreamer79

person Zeph
schedule August 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I just don't understand why you don't get thousands of reviews for this awesome story! Part Two was amazing. All the intrigues make me want to know what's going on. If Konoha doesn't want to fight Akatsuki who does?
schedule August 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic. It's very dark, twisted and rivetting how one can fall off the edge of the heroic path to become someone they had never planned on being at the beginning. I'm pretty sure Naruto would have given his all the to village of Konoha if they hadn't betrayed him but I see his fierce loyalty is stil alive and well when it comes to Sasuke. I'm glad he didn't kill Gaara and Sakura and I'm glad that Kakashi is still alive. I was suspicious of Taya just like Naru-chan and I think this story may be darker then my own Demons fic.... I LOVE IT ><

I'm so curiuos to see what happens next. Sugeitsu should have known better to poke the smexy and dangerous bear that is Naru-chan. I almost went awww when Naruto got jealous of his own bunshin for touching what was his and how easily Naruto's anger was diffused in the third chapter I believe when Sasuke licked his cheek after scolding him about Taya. It's sweet that when all that is said and done Sasuke and Naruto have each other to depend on. They are kindred spirits and it's cute that they cuddle after having violent sex XP

Can't wait to see more ^^
schedule August 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
wow! i'm left speechless! this chapter was intense!!!
i love all the betrayal and war and secret plans!!!
i wonder how sasuke could have let himself be fooled by that taya woman! i'm glad naruto got rid of her!!
why purpose would sasuke's council have in declaring war to konoha? they obviously have a second agenda! they are working against (and not FOR) sasuke and naruto!
i loved how naruto seems to have outclassed sasuke here, he saw through the lies when sasuke couldn't... or maybe sasuke wanted to exterminate what was left of konoha... ex-sensei and (pregnant) team mate be damned....
naruto may not have sasuke's intellect but he would surely be a better leader than sasuke...
i hope you will update soon, i'm on the edge of my seat, it's soooo hard to wait till next chapter!!!
person Zeph
schedule July 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
God, thank you so much for continuing In A Darker Universe! Although I loved it very, very much I kind of accepted that it was a Oneshot and then you go and surprise us with this :) I adore your version of a dark Naruto and I can imagine him so well in the dark coat/robe. Also I think it's really interesting to read how Naruto's and Sasuke's relationship works. Keep up the awesome work!
person SamuraiSaaya
schedule July 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ohh, very interesting and very dark. I love this cruel Naruto more than you can imagine. And, might I say, the rough sex is absolutely delicious. I love love love the possesiveness they have towards eachother.

I'm hooked. Please please update soon :)
person fishcake_fan
schedule July 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
HI This is yet another intriguing story of yours. Really interesting start and I really am a fan of your work.
Anyway, as you suggested we should read In A Darker Universe first, I cannot find it. Or are you in the process of posting it?
thanx