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June 17, 2014 at 12:00 AM
That was a fantastic read! I enjoyed every bit, though I must say it pained me to get through the Sakura part lol. I love the relationship dynamics with Kakashi & Iruka and Sasuke & Naruto.
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December 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh I love this story! It had me laughing from beginning to end!
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October 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I've read this I don't know how many times, and it still makes me laugh, get nervous, and get excited. This has got to be one of my [[absloute favourite]] stories on here, and I've read a shit load of Naruto fanfics.:3
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August 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
One of the best stories I've read in a while. Amazing.
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July 31, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I just had to say that I so utterly love this story. I never got into any race car movie but I was curious about your story and let me tell you I am so thankful to have done so. I read this story twice back to back and you totally drew me in. The way you captured everyones personality was so spot on. The plot was excellent and you are just hilarious. I so fell in love with all the relationships and the sex scenes had me drooling! Its so hard to find a writer like you and I implore that you continue the story.
So much was left unanswered for instance:
If kiba and naruto were so close how come we only see kiba one time in the story?
What happened between mizuki and iruka at the beginning of your story that led to the awful scar? I mean obviously naruto couldn't have stolen a scroll and what not from the actual show, so in your story what took place?
How did mizuki stop the adoption?
Did sasuke help naruto to succeed in his dream?
Did tsunade sponsor naruto?
How does itachi and diedaras relationship progress romantically?
What about shikamaru and hidan, do they actually date?
Does Gaara become as much of a threat as neji?
Does shizune really back off?
Orochimaru was shot but is he really not going to make a comeback?
Is madara not a prospective enemy?
The fact that pain was at the party could mean something... Just putting it out there.
If orochimarus men knew that itachi was in Anbu wouldn't they know about kakashi?
Why not kidnap iruka and hold him in exchange for the information they want.
What about kabuto, is he gone permanently?
What organization is Anbu with? I mean there is no hokage right?
There is really so much you could do with this story and it hurts to think its really done.
I hope there is a sequal with the same characters who hold the same personalities.
I really just had to say all this I mean even if you don't continue the story it's still awesome. Thank you so much for writing it, it was fun reading it. Take care!
So much was left unanswered for instance:
If kiba and naruto were so close how come we only see kiba one time in the story?
What happened between mizuki and iruka at the beginning of your story that led to the awful scar? I mean obviously naruto couldn't have stolen a scroll and what not from the actual show, so in your story what took place?
How did mizuki stop the adoption?
Did sasuke help naruto to succeed in his dream?
Did tsunade sponsor naruto?
How does itachi and diedaras relationship progress romantically?
What about shikamaru and hidan, do they actually date?
Does Gaara become as much of a threat as neji?
Does shizune really back off?
Orochimaru was shot but is he really not going to make a comeback?
Is madara not a prospective enemy?
The fact that pain was at the party could mean something... Just putting it out there.
If orochimarus men knew that itachi was in Anbu wouldn't they know about kakashi?
Why not kidnap iruka and hold him in exchange for the information they want.
What about kabuto, is he gone permanently?
What organization is Anbu with? I mean there is no hokage right?
There is really so much you could do with this story and it hurts to think its really done.
I hope there is a sequal with the same characters who hold the same personalities.
I really just had to say all this I mean even if you don't continue the story it's still awesome. Thank you so much for writing it, it was fun reading it. Take care!
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July 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
WOW!! That was all Spectacular!!!! I was getting scared for Itachi and Kakashi in the beginning but when Iruka's brilliant idea of asking the dogs came up, I was excited and thrilled!!! Thank you so much for the shout out, I really hate to see this story end.T___T
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July 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I was ALL TEARS reading Itachi's confessional.T____T. Deidara suddenly speaking was brilliant. I'm so glad he's realized all he has n that he's not cursed but so very blessed having all those people in his life right now.:3. I loved Sasuke's comedy act at the end too!!xD. Now he has no doubt of Naruto's feelings for him n he's free to fully demand everything he wants from Naruto. LOL!!! Great ending with Iruka taking the upper hand from Kakashi, LOVED IT!!!!
Thank you so much for this Amazing story and I SO look forward to another Brilliantly executed action/romance/comedy from you.x3
Thank you so much for this Amazing story and I SO look forward to another Brilliantly executed action/romance/comedy from you.x3
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July 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Love it.
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July 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This was a great story. I really loved/love it!
Though I still can't believe you made Kakashi into such a pervert LOL XD!!!
And Sasuke is such a cute, needy uke, soo cute!! :D
I especially loved the Itachi/Deidara moments, they're my favourite pair so it was really good!
Though I still can't believe you made Kakashi into such a pervert LOL XD!!!
And Sasuke is such a cute, needy uke, soo cute!! :D
I especially loved the Itachi/Deidara moments, they're my favourite pair so it was really good!
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March 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
*Jumps up and down with joy at a new chapter* Yay! Great chapter, needed more sex though-- Wait. Did you say only one more chapter left?! *breaks down sobbing*