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for Ecchi no shachou

by YamanashiOchinashiIminashi

person Jannis
schedule September 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Whatever is blocking you from going on with the story - I pray it will disappear soon so you could come back to us with another funny chapter. I'm not much of a reviewer, sadly. I am a devoted reader though. And the story's been good so far, so I really look forward to seeing your newest update. :)
person lo
schedule September 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Much better, for a while I thought your account was high jacked. I do like how the story is progressing.
person xxShadowheartxx
schedule August 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I totally love your story. I didn't read it until today, but once I found it, I just couldn't stop. This is one of the best stories I've found on here. I hope you continue it. I love how balanced it is between the sexy stuff and the funny stuff.
schedule August 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yes!!! Iruka n Kakashi finally having their ultimate moment.*swoons*. That was some Hot Stuff!!! Wait!! So was Sasuke n Naruto's scene, I was too into it when all of a sudden Naruto was pulled back. I was just as surprised as Sasuke, lol. I'm so glad Jiraya was there to save the situation. This was a really good chapter although Itachi n Deidara haven't come to realize their feelings for eachother. I can't wait to read the next chapter!!! Thank you so much for the dedication!!!! That was soooo cool!!!!XD. Thank you again for updating so fast!!!:3
schedule August 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
meh sakura bitch, you snooze you LOSE! Sas and Naru are so hot together. As for Keshi and Ruka... damn it's about time. ^^ The sexual tension was just killin me ya know?
person Anon
schedule August 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That is an evil cliff hanger.....and I really wanted to see sasuke open a can of whoop ass on Sakura. Maybe next time *crosses fingers* (*^_^*)
person Anon
schedule August 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Just wanted to mention that your formatting is a bit messed up in this chapter...it did the "wall'o'word" thing.
person lo
schedule August 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Unfortunately, it looks like you stopped trying.
person Dorkchic
schedule August 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ok, what is up with Iruka? He keeps going on these extreme flights of fancy and making assumptions! Why in the world would he assume Kakashi is straight in the first place and still maintain that belief after Kakashi wakes him up with a blow job and demanding kisses from him? Even if he believed it was his first time giving head (which is doubtful considering the skill level involved - first timers generally do not deep throat) then he still would have to accept that Kakashi is at least bi due to his being completely comfortable with the fact that he just blew a guy and was trying to get Iruka to do more! Just had to get my confusion off my chest because, even with the temper, Iruka always seemed to be one of the most level headed characters in the Naruto universe. Having said all that.......

I am absolutely LOVING this story and am super looking foward to the next update! Great job!
schedule August 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ahahaha.... stupid bitch. you think it would have clicked in her head, but no.