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for Ecchi no shachou

by YamanashiOchinashiIminashi

schedule March 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love that Naruto is right on time for Sasuke, with everyone and with every emotion of his. It's like a match made in heaven. I can't wait for Iruka and Kakashi to finally kiss, maybe then Iruka will realize Kakashi is for real about him.:3
schedule March 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Cool! Sasuke's getting closer to his goal of getting Naruto. Can't wait to see who all will be at the party.
schedule March 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really love Kaka/Iru moments in this fic, the sappiness is appropriate and loved by me.LOL! I'm so glad everyone will be at the party. Also happy for Itachi's mood getting better with unfortunate news.
schedule March 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yes!! I'm so glad things are looking up for them.
schedule March 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was hilarious!!!!! The drama was great and so was the sexual tension but it was just plain ol fun!!!!! Looking forward to some smexiness from Iruka and Kakashi.
schedule March 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Kakashi's a funny jokester in this story. I love the way he gets to Iruka.
schedule March 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
LOL!!! Sasuke was shot down!! Hilarious!! The exchange between him and Naruto was funny as well. I wish Naruto had said yes but dang it he's in denial. lol
schedule March 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was especially sweet with Kakashi trying to woo Iruka and sweet Iruka being terribly confused about Kakashi's intentions. This chapter was also especially funnier than the last with Naruto and Sasuke racing. OMG! I thought I'd choke laughing at Sasuke's bungling way of racing and then his embarrassment with the whole pursuing of Naruto. Lastly, with Sasuke swearing and laughing profusely at it all. I really loved it. It was funny and endearing to see him that way.X3
schedule January 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
It's funny and well written and I like it. The characters fit to their original personality but not glued. You mix very well the original features with the ones required to your story. And I like the development of the narration and... keep it going.
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schedule January 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love the new chapter. The way Kakashi is in overdrive for Iruka is adorable and makes me smile like an idiot the entire time I'm reading it. ;) And I guess I just prefer Naruto/Sai to Naruto/Sasuke which is why I have a soft spot for Sai but to each their own... See you on the next chapter