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Awww. Everything is coming together!! yay!

why does everyone feel the need to beat on Sai? Other than that I loved the new chapter, can't wait to see your next update

I was pleasantly surprised to seem that you posted a new chapter. It's well written and interesting, but it's seems unfinished, like this is only the beginning of the chapter. You stopped right when the plot was starting. Is there a chance that you simply didnt' post the whole chapter?

Frühling

At the beginning, the characterization didn't really work for me but you totally won me over! Kakashi couldn't pay attention at all, that was fantastic, because it produced one of the most fantastic mental images of hih drooling and Iruka just yelling at him, while Kakashi just fantazises away XD. Looking forward to the next chapter!

Nice one! You really captured Iruka's and Kakashi's personalties. Iruka all proper and Kakashi not even listening because he is busy reading porn. And it's well written as well. So please continue and don't abandon this story.

Frühling

you're referring to insurance - not assurance. Iruka should've called the cops on the guy for driving away from an accident.