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person Dorkchic
schedule September 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I wonder if Karin was in on this one? She is on the station so it would make sense that she at least had a hand in the support aspect of the operation..... I seriously hope bad things happen to her.
person Moonmoore
schedule September 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
The chapter was intense and all through out I was waiting for the other shoe to drop. I was especially concerned for Naruto out there patrolling on his own. The scenes with all the young ones had me worried. For a moment I taught the bad ones would get in. I loved Hana and Kiba coming to the rescue! That was awesome!! Also, the zetsus admiring Naruto's abilities made me full of wonder and pride. Silly of me but it happened. Anyway, glad that for once there were no casualties. Of course, it couldn't have happened without Shika. He was beyond awesome! I loved it and like always want more.

Thank you and take care.


Moonmoore
schedule September 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
GROUP CUDDLE!!!!!<3
person roro237
schedule September 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Amazing! Intense!! It was simply the best!!! Thanks for brighten up my day:) It's been a long and bad one. I'm feeling better now after my trip:) Thank you ^_^
schedule September 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
wow, so much was crammed into those last two chappies. They survived with no casualties AND they're aware of Oro's aims. I wonder about Shika's sudden stability. I love the way they work as a team, even without being mostly iin contact with each other. Uuchia is more than just a name.
schedule September 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad everything worked out for the best for now. Knowing you there will be more challenges to come. It was nice for Kakashi to see everyone rise to the occasion. I sometimes feel he doesn't have enough faith in the new Uchiha. It was pretty telling who Sumiko turned to in a moment of fear, it makes sense that it would be Haru, he is probably the closest genetically to Shika now that Ma and Pa are gone. Good stuff, I can't wait to read more.
person kanazerosukenaru
schedule September 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ha! I had complete faith in you Shikamaru...I knew you wouldn't fail us, but OMG it was a treat, a real treat to have Naruto back in a gunners/pilot seat. No one can aim and fire like he can..NO ONE.

Orochimaru, bit off more than he can chew this time, and my dearest hope is that Kisame catches his pasty ass. How Grand would for Kisame to have an opportunity to avenge his Uchiha? Becasue Kisame was still wearing his plaque when all of those atrocities were done to Itachi in Orochimarus Lair. Itachi may not be an Uchiha in name now, but Kisame was, is, and will forever be his Beloved.

I was incredibly pleased that Hannah and Kiba are working together, they are BOSSES!!! They are kicking asses and taking names, LOVE IT!

I hope the rest of the crew will be safe on the ship and that they will be able to help soon. I also have to say that I see a Naruto/Sasuke like realtionship forming with Haru and Ran, even though they are too too young to know it yet, it's so darn cute to watch the chibi's watching out for each other like they do.

Can't wait for more!
schedule September 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodness, I was literally shaking during this chapter! Matter of fact, I'm still shaking. I am completely blown away by your writing with each and every chapter you post and I'm always looking forward to more. So until next time.
schedule September 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Note to self: do not stop looking for updates on this fic for more than a month. I mean damn I had a lot to catch up on. I'm so glad the Sumiko issue was resolved and that Naruto may get his legs back. I'm also happy to see En-san and In-san in a healthy relationship. I look forward to the next update.
person richon
schedule September 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ahah they are under attack!! i am not here 3 days and there it is !! 2 wonderful chapters full of action !! naru you are the best !! hopefully you will kill the other pot !! see you soon with more !!