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November 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
ohoho naru is in trouble, hopefully han I unterstand... Love your story!!! really enjoy reading it
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November 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
the votes are in... I WANT TO PUNCH HAN IN THE FACE...MANY MANY TIMES.... like seriously? If he honestly cared about freedom of hybrids he wouldn't be trying to sabotage Uchiha worse "his people"??? that's no different than the Warren issuing permits making sure that a hybrid had to be owned..he's just as bad as the hybrid-haters..
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November 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Sorry I didnt review the last few chapters but because like one of the chapter titles we were definitely in a lull. I just really didn't have anything to say good or bad. They were good though, I can see from the end of this chapter we are going to reach a high point soon. You know when Naruto realized that Sasuke had a surprise for him I stupidly thought that he had brought him two of the babies...I must miss them more than I realize. Anyhoo good stuff I can't wait to see what happens with Han.
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November 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm curious about Shikamaru's feelings for Sasuke..we know he loves Na-chan...but...still curious about their relationship and how it will evolve. I'm also feeling some hope for the evacuation...but I'm beating it back with a very large stick...just in case things roll outta control again :)....I find it amazing how you stay true to all the different personalities yet allow them to grow and change with the situations..plots and sub-plots..my hats off to you and your characters...also, the more I learn about Shika's genius the more I worry.
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November 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I was about to go to sleep..its 3 AM in the morning and I have to wake up in a couple hours...I am VERY VERY HAPPY I DECIDED TO CHECK FOR AN UPDATE!!! THANK YOU!!!
Like...wow..is there gonna be a face off with HAN and Sasuke?????????
Like...wow..is there gonna be a face off with HAN and Sasuke?????????
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November 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Kakashi had me giggling at he's on a roll:) Sometimes that man can be an ass but he showed me his stuff this time. I never thought about Shik like that untill Kakashi. I also got a good chuckle out of Sasuke saying stop sama-ing me so much:) Na-chan fixing any problems with the alpha males not following requests:) I love how the crew just fits together like puzzle pieces. This is a 'Yea Baby' chapter. It cover so many people and so many happening. ~Bowing~ to you Space Queen of the Naruto Universe ^_^
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November 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
So much love! This chapter was perfect. So full of Shikamaru love! Thank you!
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November 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 1-32. I've started off with reading the first arch of this fanfic and followed through with the second and now have caught up on the third one. You've woven a tale with your beautiful world and finding places for the Naruto crew to fit in. I'm anticipating an update to your series and I've read your original stories as well. Should you decide to publish, please let me know at sunao.tsuji@yahoo.com. Other wise, I'll be back again for more updates and reviews.
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November 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I think it was me, don't worry about it, at least we got an early update :) Anyway, for the review, I think it goes like this:
"Good arc, I like how you build the tension slowly towards the climax, and I'll miss Inoichi, he kind of grew on me from the previous chapters."
(I think that was it, or maybe something about how I like Inoichi)
On a side note, I just googled Chamu, he's actually a Narutocast, and here I thought that he was an OC. Is Sickler an OC? And please don't call me Janey D= Or maybe I did sign my review as Jane-y unconsciously...
Sincerely,
Jackie
"Good arc, I like how you build the tension slowly towards the climax, and I'll miss Inoichi, he kind of grew on me from the previous chapters."
(I think that was it, or maybe something about how I like Inoichi)
On a side note, I just googled Chamu, he's actually a Narutocast, and here I thought that he was an OC. Is Sickler an OC? And please don't call me Janey D= Or maybe I did sign my review as Jane-y unconsciously...
Sincerely,
Jackie
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November 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hi! Another review, this one for Chapter 32 =D
I smiled at InariTayuya, you made them so sweet. And I loved that you put Shizune and Tonton into perspective, I wondered whether there would be the froggies and Naruto in the future. I kept imagining Gamakichi asking Naruto for snacks lol.
The chapter's nice, I can't wait to read more :)
I smiled at InariTayuya, you made them so sweet. And I loved that you put Shizune and Tonton into perspective, I wondered whether there would be the froggies and Naruto in the future. I kept imagining Gamakichi asking Naruto for snacks lol.
The chapter's nice, I can't wait to read more :)