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hi,

OMG, ``this is bad; real bad``(quote of Enzo, from Reboot) can`t wait for more. Update soon PLS. Keep with the good work. And I have to say what an amazing work you do. Cause I could not pull something like that.

:)

read you later

I repeat... things are going to get hectic. Still, what is that nutty cow trying to accomplish. Seriously.

like..wow...the action in this is speeding up! seriously I can't wait for the next chapter I am toooo excited to see what's going to happen next! ( I knew Han was going to cause trouble..he only wants fame not to actually help anyone...though his plan maybe useful in some way....)

THANK YOU FOR YOU EPIC FICS!!! I anxiously await your next update ^________^

WoW! I'm nervous it looks like the game of life and death is beginning.

This is an unbelievable standoff...I could not have imagined any of it..I knew a battle would occur but this..the suspense just keeps building and building..all the sub-characters and how their choices and actions affect the story, each time I think I know what will happen I'm left with absolute shock and a little of WTF!!! I really want Sasuke to let shikamaru loose on the bad guys...however that would be sorta wrong..I guess..dammmit... lol. I also think that I have to go back and reread...I missed Han somewhere or just can't remember him..unless he's new...I think I might kinda like him though. :)

..I foresee sooo much trouble happening with that Kurotsuchi person....can't they just like..you know..fall down some stairs and disappear...

on the other hand..I'm not sure how to feel about Inochi..in this fic..I really didn't like him that much..no..more like neutral towards him..its sad that he died but it makes a better story when the good guys have losses too..as much as happy endings are awesome..they don't really happen as much as we'd like them to

I can't believe you called this chapter "Lull", I thought.."Oh a moment of calm, its over everything will be well"..and then of course I looked up the actual meaning of the word!! Now S is out there getting children that can't get on board..crew is out there with pyscho nut jobs...and Lord knows what else is going to go wrong!! I can hardly wait for the next chapter :)...I loved the interaction between Gaara and Naruto, it felt like Naruto knew how Gaara was feeling in that moment, and maybe gave us an little incite to his developing feelings for Lee. I'm also very glad that the children were podded..I can picture Haru organizing them into little mini-snipers..and with that thought...I realize once again..I'm way to involved in the story line!! :)

well it looks like the next chapter would best be called ...and then the shit hit the fan... on noes inoichi i liked that selfish baka if only because kiba threw him and that was funny, now who will try to mess with choza's relationship with kiba which boiled down is a business exchange with love and sex being traded for love and food and oh dear sasu-kun you should have taken shikamaru's advice or shika-san doing the door-jamming on his own behalf. and finnaly it cannot be said enough YOU ROCK!!!!!!

Nooo...Inoichi's dead??? Even though he was a minor character, it still saddens me that one of the oldest members of the crew, one of the Uchiha guardians died.

oh not good. ican see things getting hectic again... and the new mayor type... foolish, foolish foolish.