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person roro237
schedule November 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
WoW wOw and one more wOw! That had action all over the place. Yea Baby! I always enjoy the way you come up with the old but new characters. Sakura! I'm looking forward to see how she will fit in:) Space Queen this was incredible. I loved it ^_^
person SidonieStarr
schedule November 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
The Uchiha call to battle! Yes!
person meowkuu2
schedule November 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I was wondering when we'd see Sakura show herself
and YEA!!! I HOPE THE FIGHTS ARE SUPER EPIC!!!
Though I'm afraid of people getting hurt...but the speech was epic!! NO GUTS NO GLORY! TEAM UCHIHA KILL KILL KILL!!
schedule October 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
damn your good. another update already. Oh I hope they can get to Sicklers person in time.
person cynaga
schedule October 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
better than ever!
schedule October 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Who knew?
person meowkuu2
schedule October 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I was soooo happy when I saw two chapter to read!!! yea!...but..Han...He feels like he's gonna cause some problems in the not too disitant future..like he might flip his lid and want to "liberate" Naruto from Sasuke..or some such foolishness...I don't think the Uchiha charm is gonna work on that guy..plus he seems that he wants to get "fame" more than help hybrids

Next..OMG! Sickler..you big idiot..*sighs* poor Ebisu....

Is there gonna be like some major kick-ass fighting btw Sumaru and Kimimaro??? I feel it in ma bones!!!

and always...THANK YOU FOR THIS EPIC STORY!! ^____________^
person v
schedule October 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm so nervous, your evil..horribly, wonderfully evil!! What is going to happen..I don't know!! I can't wait to find out...unfortunately that means i'll be checking for the next chapter..over and over and over...my weekend is shot...still love your writing completely and the storyline is "on the edge of your seat" exciting...is there going to be a battle? Will someone we all love get hurt?...what is gonna happen??!! I'll be the one banging my head on my computer desk while waiting patiently for your next update (lol) :)
person Moonmoore
schedule October 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I'm austounded for all that has happened. I can't even process it all! I am amazed by you! You are a genius! I hadn't been able to chack on this story for almost 3 weeks. Now I just want more and more and I have this huge rush of adrenaline that I don't know what I am going to eliminate. Wow, really there are no words. I had been thinking about the situation on The Warren and the lack of action for The Uchiha or Naruto to try and do something to help them out. I am so glad that something is finally being done and I just hope the don't suffer any casualties. My mind is going crazy with all the possibilities but it comes up with so many that they are almost immeadiatly discared and new spring up to replace them. You really have my mind sppining! I gotta love you! I tip my hat to you, you are amazing. What a talent lady. Thanks for sharing this part of your life with us and I will be waiting for bated breath for your next installment. *kisses*



Sincerely


Moonmoore

PS: I love the ending of the last chapter! Indeed, Naruto is Naruto and like him nobody! *Hugs Naru*
person roro237
schedule October 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
When I read the title I got scare! What could the mistake be? Thank goodness it was nothing to do with our boys:) You know how you get a call at work and you think bad things first:) I mean it is bad that a look alike got on board but there is no danger this time. Security will have to look into that:) Wonderful chapter as always ^_^