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ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhh somebody's in trouble!!!!..I too would like to know what Sasuke-sama wants to know

i know i havent reviewed in a while so im going to now. this story and your others are simply amazing.

Cute chapter with the kids all going on an adventure. Something about the sex scenes in this story irks me a little as I see (and I may be a little petty about this) are the more prevalent SasuNaru scenes (which are described heavily than the Narusasu scenes). I admit that I am a NaruSasu fan and your story starts out with Naruto being more dominating and fucking Sasuke whereas here, it's the other way around. Would be nice to see more of a balance or seeing Sasuke get dominated more by Naruto. Sorry if I sound petty, but that's just my honest opinion.

wonders if sakura will ever put in an appearance as something other than a ship and if ino will put in an appearance at all... or did she already as part of Tsunade's crew. Can't remember.
At any rate i could so totally see Sakura as a kitty... or maybe something to do with her name, do they have plant based hybrids in this? And Ino as an Ino-pig of some sort (like no one saw that coming. lol.) Ino pig the warrior boar, dealing with the flowers of her friendly rival Sakura hybrid. hehe.

I'm ashamed to admit I am a terrible reviewer but I promise I am still devouring this series each time a new chapter comes out. It's too hard to say which bits I like, because there are so many! Reading this story I've laughed out loud and been teary eyed, sometimes in the same chapter! I hope this series will continue for a long time to come. :-)

I guess you showed me... :D

I enjoyed the Adventure just as much (if not more!) than the delightful SasuxNaru that followed it.
Your dialog is so engaging and revealing of character.
I enjoyed it so much when Sasuke questioned the children about the "rules of adventure'.

Your writing is like hot cocoa in front of the fire on a cool Fall night. ♥

Thank you so much for sharing and considering input from the readers!!!

OMG OMG OMG adventure! And what an adventure it was! I could just see them all tethered together, moving in zero gravity, and riding on the train with Kakashi as conductor. Wonderful!

Mannah, your lemons are not explicit, but that does nothing to detract from their impact. I feel all of the love shared by the characters when they are intimate. It's beautiful!

I have two children myself and know how lucky Sasuke must feel.

Where do I go to pledge to Uchiha?

oh an aventure, I want one too!!Work is so boring!!I need more action!! I love your story
See you soon !!

The adventure/training was grant:) I loved it! You're the bomb for having all the children on a outing:) But I think you know what my favorite part was? Yess! Sasuke turning a fluffy soft Naruto is always a welcome read and a hot one I might add ^_^