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I adored this chapter so much... I love to see how their family grows..of how important the children are to all of them..This is my favorite story line in all of AFF. Some things are worrying for me..like evil people in their lives, Naruto and Kiba's lifespans, how much responsiblility Shika has, if Itachi will handle having a child well...but I think that I'll trust in the "god" of their little world (you) and know that you will lead them where there meant to be...Its also a little worrying to me that I'm pulled into your storylines this much (lol), but I'll just aquit that to you being a wonderful author :)

I don't know what it was about this chapter, but it make me keep on thinking about how Naruto wont be there for the long run and I made me sad. Oh well, I need to be like Sasuke and just live in the moment and quit worrying. You did another excellent job if I do say so my self, and I do ^_^. Can't wait for what comes next.

ja ne till next time and keep up the good work

As I was reading this chapter I felt all warm and fuzzy...then at the end I was like...oh shit they know about shikamaru!!!!!!!!!!..Which broke the fuzzy feeling of happiness and now I'm anxious for more!

*waves hand* oh question...Since Uchiha is getting so popular and are bond to create more enemies just because some people are evil wouldn't it also be a good thing for the adult and teenage members of the group who don't know how to fight to learn at least some basic self-defense..you know..just in case? ...mew

Interesting developments. It was nice to see the crew from someone who is kind of on the outside. Makes you look at their relationships differently and for some reason I wasn't aware that everyone was on the ship at the same time. I'm starting to think Amachi hybrids aren't as rare as I thought. You somehow manage to include a new character into the middle of things. I have to admit I'm no super interested in meeting more new characters in addition to the lot we have now but that's how I am with any story I read. Anyway good update I am looking forward to reading more.

So...Ebisu has his own hybrid and Katamari is learning the lay of Uchiha land. Interesting.

My how the crew has grown!

One of these days you're gonna get me in trouble... This saga is too awesome for me to stop. Everytime I see a new update I MUST stop everything else to read it then. I'm even skipping food on my lunch breaks. I love this and thanks so much for sharing!

yea!!!!!!!

OMG, this chapter was so sweet at the end. And then the explanation for Kiba's absence through his point of view I liked very much. I can't wait till you update again. Keep up the good work

ja ne till next time

I normally don't read AU/AR stories, but your series is truly engaging. I found myself completing "In the cold of space", "Tales", and "Iteration" all in the space of two days. The world you have created in these stories has been so fascinating, and I can't wait to read more!

Please let Gaara be okay and not have any terrible side-effects~ D:

I love Kamatari! He's adorable~<3 ^.^

Wow~ I got to the part where Sasuke told Naru-chan to tell Kiba about Gaara-kun's kidnap and I was like: "What, why would Kiba care...Oh--right--they're pack-mates. ><;" Then I felt dumb. XD

The mother ship can hold powerplants and other huge buildings?! I can't even fathom something that huge >_>;

Grr--I love your writing!! D< Just wanted to let you know ^_^b