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In his head? What, like embedded in his skull?

le gasp!!! It was like..yeaaaaa then BAM! "Rin found soemthing in Ramaru's head" and I was like...what the fuuuccckkkkkk... AWESOOOMMMMMEEEEE as usual I can't wait for you to update again this fic is keepin me on my toes! ^______________^

Alright, Sasori...don't start none, won't be none.

Poor Ranmaru!! He is faced with some impossible decisions. I really like how this parallels the anime in that Ranmaru was stronger than Neji. In the anime he was able to see more than Neji and to blind him. What you have done here is very fitting in that regard. I also like how you have made Haku. It really fits his character in the anime. He was bad ass but at the same time very senistive and gentle. I think you have captured him better than most authors who have tried to write him. Most authors make him a drag queen or flaming gay and forget that he was able to kick ass when he wanted!

Wow! You never cease to amaze me! I love it! The first part had me thinking that no one would catch Ranmaru but here comes Haku! I so fell for Haku! I love your Haku! I really love when characters are protactive. It's so sweet and cute! Aww! *hugs you* I loved the way Haku confronted Ranmaru. Poor Ranmaru, he is so delusioned. That Konan really did a number on him. Darn it! Now I am dying to see Naruto's reaction and feelings for The Ranmaru Situation. I wonder if he as, also, going to be fooled like Neji and the others, or would he feel that something is not right with him like Haku? Sweet Jesus in Heaven! I just keep wanting more! Ahhh! *pulls hair* Now to wait until Saturday, pfft...So not fair! *whines*

Ehhh, sorry! I just really, really, really like the story and where you are taking the plot. It is really good! *holds tight* You are awesome! See you next time and take care and please keep writting! Love you!

Sincerely


Moonmoore

About the possible hybrids - i suppose some people would have suggested it by now, but in case they didn't - what about Suigetsu (fish)?

I'm currently re-reading In the cold of space you find the heat of suns. It rocks almost as much as the first time! No need telling you I'm reading every new chapter you post! ;)

I FRIGGIN LOVE HAKU!!!! HELL YEA!.....more please..when you can mew mew

DAYUM! Haku is a SCARY queen (kind of like Iruka, LOL)!

Wow! This chapter had me on eggshells and towards the confrontation/interrogation, there was this ball of tension in my stomach that I feel cheated and unsettled because the chapter ended and with how long (which considering some of my fave authors, you are a very, very fast updater) it takes you to update the next chapter, this feeling will be gone and when I get to read the next chapter I will be slightly confused and would need to go back to remember what had happened before. And I am in no way flaming you or critizing(SP)*critiquing*, it is just that with the first part of the tale you used to gift us with 2 to 3 chapters a week or even more and now that we are getting one a week feels...not satisfying. Especially when a chapter is as good as this!!! Even now the tension is still there, big time too! Sorry for being such a bad follower. You are tremandiously gifted and the least I could do was let you know but I'm such a procastinator and lazy too booth that I just read and read and ignore that this is a two-way street. Anyway, awesome job and I hope the next chappie is out sooner than a week! Also, please excuse my poor typing and the rushed barely coherent message. I am high in a rush in adrenaline that I can't seem to stop and consider my ramble thoughts. This part of the story is shaping up to be one of the best yet and it might surpass "In the cold of space you find the heat of suns"! Thank you again!

Sincerely


Moonmoore

I am back from my holidays and I find 3 more chapters. i am so happy . i really enjoys reading this story. craving for more, see you soon