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person cynaga
schedule August 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Poor Konan - her spy to be Uchiha soon...
person RyuEarth
schedule August 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I am going to hate to read it when Konohamaru is told! Dx
person RyuEarth
schedule August 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
To tell the truth, I never noticed chapter 8 until you updated to chapter 9 ^^;;;;

And I don't review all the time, not on aff anyway =/
person LovelessAngel
schedule August 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I just want to let you know that I love your series. I have to admit that when I am reading it I tend to lose track of time and tend to end up in this wonderful world with the characters. Your writing is so emotional that I find myself feeling what the characters are feeling. I want to let you know that I am very happy that you have continued and cannot wait until the next chapter. Personal question? How long have you been writing fan fic? I write a little myself and would love to become as talented as you are about drawing your readers into your world.
person Lyron 713
schedule August 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You haven't lost me. I think August is a RL busy time with students and parents taking that one last vacation and getting ready to go back to school.
person nivell
schedule August 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm still here!!! You'll have to forgive me, I catch most of your updates but sometimes I am too lazy to write a review.XD You're doing a great job, though. If I type that in almost every review, it would be too repetitive. Said that Ranmaru is a spy/pawn under Konan...I was hoping that Konohamaru would finally get someone to love him back.

Loving the Kisame/Itachi scene...one day, one day Kisame will finally get to be intimate with him.
person Colette
schedule August 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
August is a bad month. Half of the world is in holidays away of their houses and internet and the other half has just started school. Don't worry to much. See you!
schedule August 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ino = Cat
Hanabi = Cat
Hinata = Cat
person satterb
schedule August 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I follow this story faithfully. I don't always review, (sorry). This universe you've created is brilliant! Great work, and I look forward to more. I love Haku, and Sasuke and Naruto are lovely. Also, many of us go back to university in the fall, and getting used to the new work load leaves us with very little time to spend here. But I will always stop to read your stories. Thanks for all your hard work.
person v
schedule August 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
August must be a quiet time for site..school starting soon!! Still love the writing and love seeing the characters and story grow!!