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I am still reading but I think with all the different stories you have started, it might just be confusing to the other readers. I think you could have easily included this set of stories into Tales of Tarrasade but I can see that you want them to be apart from one another. So it's a bit of a dilemma I think. As for the story, I'll review everything since I didn't review before. It's interesting. I am sort of enjoying learning more about the minor characters of the main storyline but I say sort of because I am much more interested in Sasuke and Naruto's story with their relationship, the kits, and Kakashi and Iruka. And that also may be why it's a quiet time for Iteration. The reader just may not be as interested or invested in reading about Inari, Konohamaru, Tayuya, and Sumaru. I am intrigued by Ranmaru's story and what his role as spy will ultimately impact the characters we care about. I can see that he has been brainwashed by Konan but I also think he feels more for Maru than he thinks. I would want the Uchiha to show mercy, maybe rehabilitate him but he is also a threat, a major threat because of who he is working for. So if you don't mind a smaller audience for this story, I think it could turn out to be a very good story, one that I will continue to read as you post it.

The fall semester has begun in many places, I suspect.

You won't lose me.

hi,
can`t wait for more. Ohhhh, now orochimaru is back and Ranmaru is connected with the Akatsuki. Let see where the intrigue will bring ous. Update soon. The character that comes in my mind just like that is Sai I think he should be a panther (black) or cat hybrid. He is lean and well define muscles but not bulky in body type. There is Suigetsu (he could be anything, I don`t know to much of this one; with his white hair he could be a snow leopard or fox) and Jugo (I see this guy as a bear due to his stature and the fact that he is a beserker). Also Deidara, hidan, kakuzu and Madara are left of the characters that I know. Which alligence will they have? Since the story is not the quite the same. Keep with the good work.
read you later.
:)

I have read all that you have posted, and i love your work. Your work is creative and well writen, sorry i havent yet taken the time to review but i just wanted to say that your amazing, and that i hope you keep wrighting! Anyway, no mater what i'll keep reading!!!
oh and by the way your in my top 5 authers on AFF.net!! Keep it up.

Hey hey... I heard you wrote august was a quite month for reviews. Well that is just unacceptable! This story is great and I am so happy you are continuing it with more sagas. This one is prooving very interesting! I am excited to see what you plan to use akatsuki for, and kennenth just got a lot more interesting haha. I kind of hope the target is sasuke. Sasuke almost seems to be fading from the plot a little bit to me. Naruto has taken almost all the light when he is around... otherwise it is the children. I adore sasuke in your story so I hope something big brings him back in. It is almost like he is just laying on the shoulders of all those around him while he himself gets all the credit for doing nothing. Anyway thats just my point. I LOVE this story this story to pieces! Keep writing!

It's probably just the back to school craze, and people are just distracted. By-the-by I really enjoyed this chapter and thought you did a wonderful job. I can't wait till you update again. Why did Orochimaru have to come back, and Ranmaru I want to shoot him so he doesn't integrate into the Uchiha household.

Man--I feel so bad for Kabuto, he's so abused T~T He needs to find someone better XP

Aww~ poor little Deluded!Pawn!Ranmaru DX

GAH--I'M SO EXCITED FOR ITA-CHAN AND KISA-CHAN TO GET BACK TO HA-CHAN AND BABY!MAI~!! *0* -loses mind- I love that her name is Mai, by the way, that's so pretty~<3

Keep up the good work please~! ^_^b -gives cookies- :D

hellooo!!! haven't lost me as a reader just been out of luck with the net for awhile, I both love and am afraid of what's happening in the story...I don't knu if I can manage something disastrous happening....(i was suspicious of that ranmaru guy....)

Space Queen that was awesome! The message from the holoprojection was some incredible writing! ~Bowing~ to you on that wOw! The plot really thicken up with this chapter. I loved it ^_^

I don't think I've ever read Sasuke apologize to Naruto in any fic so adorably. The fact that he was wearing Naruto's orange shirt was just the icing on the cake.