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by mannahpierce

person cynaga
schedule August 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
The waiting chapter was really nicely done. It was entertaining and moved the story forward in so many nice ways.
person roro237
schedule August 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I didn't realize how much I misses our boys until now:) That was an all round great chapter! There was something about everyone. Espeically a Naruto Sasuke and the children hog like myself:) Kakashi and the scissors was funny:) Space Queen I loved it ^_^
person eau_vive
schedule August 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
hi,

happy dance for the update. Keep with the good job. Wow, new member. Well, let see where they go from here. Guess things are getting hot for the young ones.

read you later
person cynaga
schedule August 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
lovin' the empath spy for Konan story line...
person Anon
schedule August 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
when you first introduced haku to the crew, i thought that he was going to kill sasuke or was going to be a spy of some sort. he turned out to be one of the most loyal people around, i get the very same feeling about this little empath of yours. i don't like him, i can't imagine the people he works for, they have to be brutal and very clever. i'm pretty sure it is the akatsuki, and i hope they are not trying to get to sasuke, and it makes me wonder if itachi has been playing a role all along.
schedule August 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You can't trust anybody these days.
person roro237
schedule August 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Space Queen of Naruto somehow I had a feeling Ranmaru was to good to be all the way true:) Tayuya woman's intrusion is still saying don't trust him yet. Plus Konohamaru knew he was throwing a seducing looked on the vido. Which surprised me last time. But an empath huh?! Well I'm looking forward to see how our crew will handle this!! ^_^
person ahmenet
schedule August 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I was wondering what kind of spy he was, now I simply feel sorry for him. I wanted to let you know I have re-read "In the cold of space..."and "Tales in Tarrasade". These are wonderful stories you have written and are continuing to write. I hope this world continues for as long as you can find inspiration.
person Anon
schedule August 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
for some reason when you wrote about the coin with naru and sasu on it, it made me think of the song Us by Regina Spektor...weird.

anyway this was a good chapter, i liked the fact that sumaru is letting tayuya know that he it interested in her, and he will only take her as she is, and not expect her to change for him.

i'm anxious to see how itachi's daughter is growing. i can't wait to see how he will behave as a daddy.
person RyuEarth
schedule August 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Why do I feel that Kono-kun is lining himself up to get hurt??? Dx

But awesome update! Thank you! =)

As for the ff(.)net thing, people over there are weird (or stuck up/can't see a good story even if you shove it in their faces), it might take a while to get it up and running... and tend to be more SasuNaru fans (but that is just my thoughts on it, since I read this for the plot then the NaruSasuNaru moments) ^^;;;;;;