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by mannahpierce

person richon
schedule August 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Really enjoy reading your story !! I am craving for more!!!
schedule August 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Konohamaru is a himbo.
person roro237
schedule August 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
WoW!!! Kono has a lover:) I know it's to early to be sure but I do hope he's not a spy or anything?! Can I take it that Inari is in love with our wild child Tayuya:) It seem like Sumaru might have an eye on her to?:) You already know what I found so sweet that I did the fangirl squeal NARUTO and SASUKE coins I love it! ^_^
person m0rlana
schedule August 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Double sided intrigue!!! Ranmaru and his siren ways with Kono and the coin. Could either be a symbol of death for Sasu or Naru, especially if only dead heros adorn the trinkets? Are they inviting a trojan horse into their midsts? I anticipate the next chapter!
person meowkuu2
schedule August 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
yay!! I love it and I want more of it, what can I say, this stories addictive ^____^
person RyuEarth
schedule August 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I liked the way that they handled the new cat!

Thank you for the update! =)
person richon
schedule August 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i really enjoy reading this story, I want to know what will happen with the new cat !! see you sonn with more
schedule August 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
LOL you know you must have read my mind...I was thinking it had been awhile since I'd read one of your Naruto x Sasuke x Naruto lemons and I was thinking of going back to some of your earlier ones from In the Cold...but then you wrote this, and now I am appeased.

I love it when they are together in this.
person roro237
schedule August 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! That was so good:) So sexy:) I was saying this as soon as I read the last line 'YeaBaby' Now that my nose stop bleeding:) It was sweet how Sasuke connected with the children. That had my fluffy naruto side out. I truly enjoyed this chapter! I'm like Sasuke knowing Naruto only has ten or so standard left hurts but just like Sasake I'll enjoy each chapter we have together ^_^
person IceInu39
schedule August 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I LOOOOOVE your Naruto stories!!!! But is Itachi and Haku's relationship going to go any further is Haku luv Itachi too or just be nice to him for K's sake.