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September 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
oh yea! chapter 113? woot! a climax! a climax! thanks so much for the update and i'm covered in chill bumps for the next chappie! woot! i luv this world of yours.
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September 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh crap, this is not good! Horrible, horrible cliffhanger! Have the hybrids been brainwashed, lobotomised in such a way that they keep going with no other thoughts except that one order? I hope the guys get past whomever is cyber attacking the compound so they can help!
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September 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
What a creepy development. I got cold chills reading this. Why can't anything ever be simple??? LOL Thanks for sharing. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
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September 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Aaaah, so unexpected and worrying O:
I don't really understand what white noise signifies but I guess I'll find out soon enough.
Aaah, damn Oro >.<
I don't really understand what white noise signifies but I guess I'll find out soon enough.
Aaah, damn Oro >.<
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September 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
[ch 113] Ah! Sasuke! Challenges? What challenges? Naruto to the rescue? Maybe ... great cliff hanger!!!
I love it when Sasuke says, "In the cold of space..."
And the crew answers, "you find the heat of suns!"
I love it when Sasuke says, "In the cold of space..."
And the crew answers, "you find the heat of suns!"
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September 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
no... just.... please don't.... hurt them any more... They were supposed to be heroes and they have to stay hidden because their always somebody's target. How much more they can last?
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September 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFf.
FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFf.
MANNAH!
No! Dx
NO SUSPENSE!
BAD MANNAH!
Actually I lie this chapter was greatbutff.
FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFf.
MANNAH!
No! Dx
NO SUSPENSE!
BAD MANNAH!
Actually I lie this chapter was greatbutff.
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September 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
my heart is beating so hard i think it might explode.
i hope i make it til the next update 'coz just when i think i know where the bad guys are coming from
you pull another brilliant twist and blow my mind
superb writing and imagination
i hope i make it til the next update 'coz just when i think i know where the bad guys are coming from
you pull another brilliant twist and blow my mind
superb writing and imagination
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September 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
WHAT'S HAPPENING!?!?!?! GAH!!!
Great chapter as always Mannah-san!
Great chapter as always Mannah-san!
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September 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Space Queen wOW! Small beads of sweat have gather on my forehead!! First off I missed you. Second off wOw!!! I was like everyone else thinking the worst was Sasuke slitting a man throat. I was hoping he could handle the aftermath of something like that. Then the great moment of Sasuke saying "In the cold of Space the crew you fine the heat of suns" I loved that part! I could visualize that:) The kids looking and acting Uchiha. Then just like Jaws you know the music right? BamB!!!! The challenges began. Oh Great Queen of the Naruto Space Universe that was a truly amazing chapter! That was an incredible visual intense OMG exciting amazing heart wrenching chapter! Thank you for all the hard work you put into that ~Bowing~ wOw! Plus the coup de graw you left with a back breaker of a cliffy! You blew the smoke from your six-shooter and put it in your hoster after this chapter:) I LOVED it ^_^