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by mannahpierce

person smauigirl
schedule September 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Everytinme I think I can't like this story more you put up a chapter like this. Thanks for all the work you put into this it really is a great story.
schedule August 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Reading this chapter left me highly satisfied!
Ah, I love reading your stories so, so much!
I also loved the badass-ness of Neji towards Klenn last chapter as well, but aff somehow didn't add my review last time, so I mention it here.
In all honesty, I wouldn't be surprised if Naruto's recovery didn't go smooth >.> I'm not sure why I'm almost expecting it, however, it would be relieving not to make Sasuke go through extra "Naruto's well being" drama :D
schedule August 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
No update on Saturday.... bad news....
This chapter was wonderful. I love KakaxIru moments. Does Ran's sitting between Kakashi and Iruka counts as letting Kakashi touch him? Was it this breakthrough that Kakashi had been waited for so long? It kind of was, right? Even if it wasn't a direct 'touch'...
Shikamaru shocked me with what he said about Klenn. I was as shocked as Iruka (or more!!!) with two of three parts of his statement!
person richon
schedule August 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ran made a lot of progress, he is more social and understand people better. iruka is fine, he has recover and can walk now... it's naru turn to be better !! love this story , see you soon
person Aflyingmonkey123
schedule August 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
*sigh* A very good day indeed...

I love Ran!!
And Yes Iruka has movement! WOOHOO!
Nuu~
person cynaga
schedule August 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
[ch 112] A Kakashi is indeed the perfect unit for measuring desirability! :D
person roro237
schedule August 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh Queenie I was in heaven:) That was fantastic! I enjoyed every word!! I laughed when Ran-chan said no to watching Kakashi give Ir-chan the message. Yes their son knows them:) It was so sweet when Ran-chan called for Kakashi to help Iruka get out of the tub. You know I loved how Naruto showed up with the triple and then two more of the litter show up then Sasuke and their hold wonderful bunch comes for mid-day meal. It just seem so right for To-chan and Papa to have a litter:) I smiled when Iruka though yea I'm glad their gone to eat:) I just love Tsuneo-chan he's little Naruto. He put a smile on my face every time he's around:) Space Queen I'm serious I really loved this chapter!!! It was everything and I enjoyed it to the max 'Believe it' ^_^
schedule August 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
a very good day indeed. Now all we gotta do is get Naru fixed, get the sub level up and running and get rid of Oro for good... good luck with that one though. :P
schedule August 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That was a really nice soothing chapter, I think. I am happy that Iruka is getting back on his feet literally. Also that Ran is growing and adapting much faster than I thought he would. Love that he is really starting to feel like he is Kakashi and Iruka's son and that his relationship with Kakashi is leaps better than it was before. I find his relationship with Haru very interesting. I wonder if that is the basis for a romantic relationship later?

I hope we get to see more of the triplets as time goes on, I can see that Tsuneo is a terror already. I still am waiting for Naruto to be Naruto again. I'm glad that Shika's attraction and weakness for Klenneth was sort of addressed and I like that Iruka was a shocked and surprised by Shika's weakness there. I do wish that someone would push him to face his feelings and truly decide what he wants. If it's really Neji then great and if it's Klenneth I think that would be fine too. I just don't want his indecision to became an instability in his current relationship or afterwards when Klenneth dies. I can already see the guilt and the what ifs when that day comes to pass. Maybe Shika spending this little bit of time left with Klenneth would not be the worse thing in the world.
schedule August 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Mannah Pierce, you are light and love. I absolutely adore you.