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by mannahpierce

schedule August 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
It's weird to think that Neji and Shikamaru are not as in love as I thought they were. I think they care deeply for one another but I think if someone more compatible came along that they would part and I never thought that about them before the last few chapters. Shikamaru especially since he worked so hard to get Neji seems to view him as more of someone he needs to help with Sumiko than someone he personally couldn't live without and I don't know if that is because he's Shika or because of something else. Neji's comments to Klenneth were very telling as well. It kind of makes me sad tbh. I thought that their love was rings and forever as Sumiko put it. You have really made Sumiko grow on me considering how much you made me hate her to start. I'm glad that we didn't go there with Klenneth and Shika, I just wish that Shikamaru had been strong enough to stand his ground or sure enough to tell Klenneth no. I hope that Shikamaru gets stronger, I think he along with Naruto are the heart of this story and I need him to be able to withstand whatever comes at him both physically and most importantly emotionally.
schedule August 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love you, Neji!
person smauigirl
schedule August 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Love the whole interaction with Klenn, Shika and Neji. Can't wait to see where it all goes.
person Aflyingmonkey123
schedule August 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter!... Can not wait for the next update!
person cynaga
schedule August 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
[ch 111] Yummy chapter. Thanks!!!
person angelj232000
schedule August 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Poor Shika. He is loosing so many people. I can't wait until to see what you do with Deidara now that he is caught. Keep up the awesome work. <3 HUGS!!!
person Dorkchic
schedule August 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That is so sad. I never even considered Klenn's age retard- which is odd because you made specific mention of his probable age and the fact that his age retard was still holding earlier in the timeline. It would damage Shika to know that he is going to loose Klenn- especially in the light of all the recent events. Maybe they could clone him and if they figure out a way to maintain reprint Ranmaru's memories they can copy Klenn's memories over. This is of course assuming that he did not decide that he was tired of being lonely and was ready to pass on. But personally, I do not believe he is that way. He strikes me as someone who would cling to life (and whatever new idea, friend, lover, expansion of humanity) fiercely and would fight to continue on and see the beauty of the universe as it unfolds.

What he needs is a family to humanize him so more and help relieve some of his loneliness.
person richon
schedule August 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
hoho naru you are a genious, it's a way to relax ... and to wake up.., poor shika he will lost klen too!!! what will choose he to do ?? love this story, see you soon
schedule August 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Five standards. That's like what -- five months?

How is Neji going to take Shikamaru spending more time with a man he knows is after him?

Drama...
person satterb
schedule August 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Please don't let Klennethon take Shika!!!! For some reason, I still don't trust him. Sure he's helping Uchiha out, but he's so obsessed with Shika that he might just be willing to do anything. LOL I trust you, and I appreciate all your hard work on this story.