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Not my 2 favorite characters but you write them in a way that I still want to care about them, something that both the anime & manga don't do for me. I can't wait for the next chapter, you are doing such an awesome job with this fic keep it up. <3 HUGS!!!!

I really feel that my opinion of Moegi has changed quite a bit since the bombing..she seemed very much a side character that wasn't really offering anything to the storyline, that she was just there..her name would pop up once and a while and most of the family seemed to just deal with her presence but not enjoy it, so she surprised me alot with how much she handled during the bombing and how she helped and participated after it also. I liked Udon right away when he was introduced, but I really couldn't see his attraction to Moegi and didn't think about it that much..I have to say that I'm really beginning to root for them, I think the way you've tied Moegi's growth as a family member, Medico, and women to Udon finally finding a place in the world where he is needed, respected, and confident in his work..plus the added humor of them both being so shy around each other, its great:) Kamatari's character is getting interesting to ...plus who knew he'd be such a great friend to Moe-chan..but I guess he's growing up too. I wonder how much Hybrids mature emotionally faster then purebreads? Great chapter :)

[ch 109] Thank you for your sci-fi author recs and this lovely chapter on Moegi and Udon!!! *hug*

Oh so sweet:) What makes it so sweet for me is their shyness. They might be forty and still holding hands:) That was a total joy and new challenge ahead to have a relationship out side of the crew. Plus Karin is in the mix! I see interesting development on the horizon! The title fit perfect:)

Kamitari the matchmaker. :)

This chapter was spectacular and inspirational. I'm please to have found such an excellent writer and story. You make people think. You make them feel. I will continue to read your stories and look forward to more.

No 'buts' only 'how'! I wish I had in me to try it.........

Nuuuu~ Love is in the air! With Inryoku and Enerugi! annnnnd also with Moegi and Udon.... Oh how lovely.
Great chapter as always. Can not wait for more Mannah-san!

How incredibly sweet! Maybe when they do the security analysis they will stumble across that psyco Karin and follow the trail back to the chief loathesome slug. Here's hoping! Once again it was a great chapter and looking foward to the next.

I have to comment on Chapter 107, too: it is so aptly named. Making the kits objects of Orochimaru's obsession puts a whole new spin on things; after all, Pein thought they were disposable. One wonders how Uchiha will try to protect them when it is time for them to cat (or otherwise gain experience in the world. Or galaxy.} The anonymity that worked, for a time, for Sasuke seems unlikely to succeed given how distinctive the kits are. The price of fame seems to be one of your big themes - just how constraining and dangerous it is.

You seem to be telling us that the craftsman who repaired Sasuke's mother's desk was an agent of Orochimaru. Did he get anything other than a picture?

The Zetsus' makeover was fun. (Haku was hilarious, as usual.) But it all goes to another of your major themes - redemption and its limits. Also the critical contributions that can be made by those who have been redeemed. As always, I can't wait to find out what happens next!