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August 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
so much happening in just 2 chappies.
shivers. Oro is just so damned creepy. i pity anything that has his attention.
I'm glad shika's sitch is improving, en and in's as well.
And naru, well i shoulda had more faith that u'd fix him. I really shoulda.
snickers. Poor 'keshi.
shivers. Oro is just so damned creepy. i pity anything that has his attention.
I'm glad shika's sitch is improving, en and in's as well.
And naru, well i shoulda had more faith that u'd fix him. I really shoulda.
snickers. Poor 'keshi.
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August 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OH! *hands clapping* There is so much about this chapter I enjoyed:) Naruto and Sasuke discussing things, Naruto getting back kidney function!! Hooray!! Haku meeting with En-chan & In-chan (who are still adorable to me), Sumiko standing up for her Ni-chan (very smart for 3 to pick up on the undercurrents between him and Kakashi and act accordingly..lol) I just know that as soon as Shika left the room Neji gave her a big hug :)This chapter gave me such a good feeling about how everyone is together and slowly healing...but the most exciting,(besides Naruto of course) is the possibility of a relationship for Tatsuji...I'm so curious about him..I hope we learn more about him and who he is and please, please, please...I hope we get to be witnesses to any relationship developing for In-chan and En-chan..new romance is always lovely :) your devoted fan...V :)
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August 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I loved Haku in this chapter. I loved how he set Zetsu up at the end, so cute. I alson for the first time liked Sumiko. I liked that she was protecting her nii-san. Kakasji totally deserved being hit by a cup. Iruka was to cute too. Can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the awesome work. <3 HUGS!!!!!
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August 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
chapter 106-108. woot! loved how the chapters went! unexpected as always with you and your beta plotting away. lol. kakashi giving sasuke a good shaking in chapter 106 was marvelously hilarious with sasuke's embarrassed thoughts and possible questions. the unexpected and new found information of fixing naurto up was exhilarating considering that it will fit into the story line somehow considering the divs that it will take for him to completely heal. and not to mention your creative way of having haku pretty up the zetsu so he was ready for chapter 108. loved how sumiko defended shikamaru and the swearing in of the zetsu riled kakashi to for a comfort drink. briliantily written and i hope to read more soon as well since i'm doing lots of catching up. ^^ thanks very much for the updates and hard work you and your beta put into writing this. greatly appreciated!
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August 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was frickin awesome! I love these chapters that give us an in depth view of daily life in Uchiha! I loved Kakashi's reaction to the Zetsus. I was also shocked and elated that Naruto can be healed. I had begun to get used to the idea that he was going to be handicapped permanently. I think you did all that on purpose! LOL! Thanks for all your hard work. I look forward to more.
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August 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
“I think the Zetsus have been Haku-ed,” Iruka observed." Best line ever! This was a very sweet and funny (how Kakashi reacted to the situation)chapter.
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August 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
[ch 108] It was delicious seeing Sumiko support Shika for a change!!!
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August 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This was just great! Especially Kakashi.... just great. Thank you!
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August 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yosh! Things are looking up! With Enerugi and Inryoku sworn to Sasuke it's going to be interesting. I'm so glad Naruto's getting better Nuu~ So the triplets can experiance dancing with To-chan Dooooh~ Can not wait for the next chapter Mannah-san!
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August 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG brilliant!!!! I loved it:) You know I cracked up when the milk was pitched:) I tip my hat to Kakashi for knowing a good pitch when he feels it! I'm so glad that In-san and En-san are not prisoner anymore. I think they will be valued crew members. They have shown that already. But of course what has my blood warming up is the new device Shik made for Naruto to give to Sasuke wOw! That device gets a 'Hell Yea Baby'! With left thump activation wOw! You out did yourself with that invention:) I'm going into kid mode "Can I see it huh, huh can I see it?! Can I see Sasuke when Naruto turns it on huh, huh:)" Ok that's my silly-ness for the day! I got so caught up in the device I almost forgot about Haku:) I love how he made over the Zeus. The Zeus was very taken with Haku and his partner:) I really enjoyed this chapter! ~Bowing~ Thank you for all your hard work ^_^