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by mannahpierce

schedule August 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Sasuke was really lucky. I thought that Naruto would somehow be in his own bedroom by the time he comes back and that he would have a lot to fix.... But Naruto is always the best! On every level. Now, maybe Klenn has some new and absolutely incredible and expensive and (maybe even illegal) finding that would help Naruto...Did they even ask... Well Shika probably did....I think they should take a male as a courtesan (did I spell it right? probably not) because it's been awhile since some new sexy meat appeared. Sai would be perfect! He's kind of girly...
schedule August 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh! And I almost forgot! I loved the vision of Sasuke jumping into the bathtub in his shoes and clothes and!!! He doesn't do much spontaneously sexy things.... And Naruto ripping them like in some gay porno was... just perfect. I thought that Naruto will just suck him off and finger but this was much better! Thank you for the chapter. Was great! I love Naru.
person Aflyingmonkey123
schedule August 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Its so amazing seeing Naruto being Naruto. Oh I missed him.
Stupid Sasuke, thinking stupid things, Sure I can see it from his point, But you love Naruto and he loves you.
Excellent chapter as always Mannah-san! :D
person TanuKyle
schedule August 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I like how Kakashi is still Sasuke's figure to look to.
And how Naruto is so positive, but then Sasuke does a tiny thing and he gets really upset - it shows what they mean to each other.
And how Naruto wants to fix Haru and knows he can't and just all the little things you put in that show all the depth.

And also a look at Hamaki/Terai/Fu! <333~
Because I asked for that earlier and just fff<3
schedule August 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon no losing fluffy soft and growly. noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo.
Still, naru seems to be adjusting with his usual flare. Naru is just to epically awesome for words.
I'm glad the Zetsue's are getting more personal contact. Now if only we could do something for Konan her maid and her kid. Can't be good for it to be isolated like that.
person richon
schedule August 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ohoho sasu you nearly made a big mistake, hopefuly kakashi was here to make you realise!! naru pardon you !!
this story is awesome, i am sure shik and rin will find a way to heal naru the way he was. I have a very good timle reading your story, i check evrey day to see if you have post a new chapter, I am addict !!! thank you for this wonderful story !!!
schedule August 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i dont know how they did it. maybe i havent been in love to a level where i can be with my mate when there is only half of them there.
person roro237
schedule August 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
YEA BABY!!!!! You know I was prepared to cry when I seen the title:) I just stopped and went and got the box of tissue. I cracked up when Sumiko ran the other way when Haku came in:) I do so adore Haku he's so sexy without trying and he knows when to put his foot down. The three dad's needed that talking to. Then it came time for the tissues! When Naruto was talking about C-san and that stuff I was getting watery eyed. BamB Sasuke jumps out of the tub! Naruto is left crying and so was I! Why Sasuke?!:) Ok he was told by the number one ass how wrong he was:) I love Kakashi done get me wrong even in the anime but the man is still an ass on so many levels:) Anyways he got Papa back to To-chan:) I loved spending the day with Naruto. I'm still sad that Naruto is being a goat head and not doing the clone thing. But that is so his character:) Oh Great Queen of the Naruto Space Universer this was fantastic I loved every word ^_^
schedule August 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Finally Sasuke gave up and resorted to eyelashes. “Please, dobe, I’ll be sore.”

LOL that's dirty pool!

Good to see Naruto back in action. I've missed him SO MUCH!
person Dorkchic
schedule August 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was so sweet and so sad at the same time. It is sweet that Naruto and Sasuke have reached an understanding and it is sweet (and funny) the way Kakashi got him to see the light. But it is so sad that Naruto has just accepted that he will be crippled for the rest of his life and is trying to plan around it. I think it shows a great strength of character to accept how things are and adapt so that he can move on, but it almost feels like he is giving up.