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by mannahpierce

person Aflyingmonkey123
schedule August 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You had me crying very hard... Oh man
person Dorkchic
schedule August 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
So sad and so sweet at the same time. It is good that everyone got to see Naruto even if they had to see him incapacitated like that. I wonder how long it will take before someone asks about why he placed the restrictions that he did on his treatment options? Or how long it will be before someone tries to talk him into lifting those restrictions--- maybe some emotional blackmail concerning Sasuke or the children would be involved? I would have to wonder if he would allow one of his children the same restrictions if they were in a similar situation- because I doubt he could stand seeing one of the children in that kind of condition if there was anything he could do about it.
person liby318
schedule August 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for bring Naruto back. I missed your version of him.
schedule August 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh Haku and Naru, you have been missed soooooooooo very badly. I'm glad Sas and Haru made up and that Sumi chan is being reigned in. And that in and en got a chance to have visit. Maybe they'll be allowed to do more. Konan too. There's still such a mess to manage. I truely, turely hope there's a way for sas and naru to get it on because they need that connection, that love, to confirm and strengthen each other... and cause it's seriously hot. >>
person satterb
schedule August 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hell yeah! You go Haku!!!! I'm so happy you decided to have Haku straighten that little shit out! LOL I feel so much better now. I look forward to whatever you may come up with next. I would love to read some hot Haku-Itachi-Kisame lovin...if ya don't mind. Thanks for all your hard work.
person k
schedule August 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I don't read stories on this site, I don't read alot really but my friend v kept pestering me to read yours so I gave in to shut her up and i thought "Gay Space People, really v, you dork" . After the first chapter of Cold of Space I stayed up all nite reading it all. For 3 days I haven't stopped reading in my spare time. its a great story I really like it and i'll keep reading it. v just smirks at me :)
person SunaoTsuji
schedule August 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
chapter 87-103 woot! got the internet back and now i'm caught up! yay! loved how the chapter at 103 ended. it was cute how the children scolded Sasuke with their innocent way of stating facts. glad that In-chan and En-chan got a visit from Haru and the other kits. unexpectedly fun. thanks for the hard work and i hope to read more soon!
person cynaga
schedule August 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
[ch 104] Hurray Haku!
person angelj232000
schedule August 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
YAYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!! Haku is up!!!!!! I loved how Haku came to Shika's aid. It is very good to have him back. I am also glad that Sasuke and Haru had a good talk. I hope you have a chapter coming up that has more of a reunion for Haku, Itachi and Kisame, I love those 3 together.Keep up the awesome work. <3 HUGS!!!!!
person Gaia77
schedule August 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Thank the almighty GODS for HAKU..OMFG!!!!!!

*sighs contently* Finally.....

And I'm so happy Haru and Sasuke and Hikaru patched things up...I dont like issues like that in my own family much less this one. Although I understand such things are needed it doesnt make them any harder to swallow. *cheers Mannah*