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August 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ALRIGHT!!!!!! Haku for the win! Finally someone had a 'hell to the no!' moment and put their foot down. The fact that Haru was so appreciative and grown about it made it even better. Maybe he and Haku can have some conversations now and Haru can benefit from some different perspectives (Sasuke, Kiba, the Zetsus, and Haku)- plus it is always nice to be able to talk to someone who has no personal stake in what you do and will give (mostly) unbiased feedback. Another great chapter!
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July 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I am so proud of Ran! And I hope Kakashi will settle down and learn to trust, but I guess tht isn't his personality though. I'm happy to read your works and I'm always looking for more. Thank you for sharing.
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July 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
So we must wait for 'the talk' until Wednesday then... I'm glad that Haru had been found and that there was no tragedy like him being sick or hurt or kidnapped....
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July 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Way to go Ran! I am glad he is making progress when it comes to establishing connections with others and acting in their best interests.
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July 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That was beautiful! Now are the Zetsus going to be offered the opportunity to swear to Uchiha?
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July 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This was a wonderful chapter. I love Ran and Haru. I was happy to see Haru's siblings pulling for his safe return. Thanks for all your hard work. I look forward to more!
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July 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Very sweet chapter. Thanks again for a great story.
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July 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I have tears in my eyes:) That was wonderful! I'm so happy! Ran is a very good friend. The ass is turning out to be a good father for Ran:) OK he's not an ass but old school Uchiha. It was so cute the way Ka-chan yip to his brother with the message. I loved that part. I have to give the title all my thumps up:) It was dead on ^_^
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July 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
[ch 103] I adore how Kashi trusted Ran to do the right thing. It's really the only way to teach children responsibility. The chapter was so well written! I felt like I had watched an episode of anime when I was done - I could see and feel everyone so clearly.
Arigatou gozaimasu for this lovely chapter, Mannah-sensei.
Arigatou gozaimasu for this lovely chapter, Mannah-sensei.
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July 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait to see how Sasuke handles this. I hope he isn't to mad with Haru. Zetsu was really funny in this chapter. I hope he gets to pledge to Uchiha. I hope Sasuke & Haru will get better. I wonder how Sasuke will handle telling the children about Naruto. This was a great chapter I cried when Sasuke was holding Haru & when Kakashi asked Ran if he wanted to hold his hand. Ran may have said no but it was very touching. Keep up the AWESOME work. <3 HUGS!!!!!