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Holy Cow!!! Is Sumiko a typed genius too, maybe of the lower class but still typed? And nobody was expecting it so they don't see her manipulation. HOW DOES NO ONE SEE THAT? I feel so bad for Haru, he just keeps on running into things he should not know, especially the info on Naruto. The umbilical cord idea isn't working??? this cant be Naruto MUST go back to normal. I know I said that I would get use to the idea of him using prosthetics but I lied. What's a Naruto if he cant run and frolic with his children. How if he suppose to be Sasuke's Guardian? Well I guess super genius Shika would be able to outfit him with the best, but still. He wont have time for that when caring for Sumiko. That child is evil, why did Shika decide to unpod her anyway?

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JA NE TILL NEXT TIME AND I CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPPY, YOU GUYS KEEP IT UP. Ya'll r my heroes, really, you get me trough my week

Ran's pretty smart when he wants to be. But why doesn't he tell Iruka and Kakashi about the "spoilt little brat". I mean Iruka will understand and I'm positive beleive him. He would even (him or Kakashi) do something about it.If Ran tells them he knows that Haru is suffering because of it and he KNOWS what's happening is the truth because he can 'sence' it.

[ch 100] One of your best chapters and they are all wonderful. You are a masterful story teller of psychological drama. I loved this insightful line: "It did not help that Haru thought about things again and again. That meant he got hurt again and again." Your characters are rich and immediate. You bring them to life in very short order by showing the core of their beings via their actions and thoughts. I'm really impressed and feel a bit guilty that you spend so much time on this fanfic when you should be writing your own sci-fi novel for publication...

Once again I feel horrible for Shika and Haru. Shika is being manipulated by a selfish, mean, attention whore in toddler form and Haru is suffering in silence because he cannot find a way to convince anyone of what is happening without looking selfish and mean himself. Shika is too overwhelmed to see what is happening and even if he could, his sense of guilt over all that has happened would keep him from doing to much about it. It is one of those occasions where you wish that Iruka was back in the playroom because I guarantee that he would see that nonsense and nip it in the bud. Maybe Ran could talk to Iruka. Then maybe Iruka could talk to Shika and help him set aside some of his guilt. Either way I hope the children talk to Sasuke en masse about how horrible Sumiko is being and how her nasty selfish behavior is affecting everyone- children and adults alike.

Poor Haru.... Sumiko is being a brat. Shikamaru should be about to see that. I like Ran, he's being a good friend. And I'm really hoping the Zetzus are going to be in the story more. I really like them.

Awwww! This is so sad and terrible that I can hardly bear it! I know that you always have things work out for the best, seeing Haru so distraught is hard to witness. I love this story, and I look forward to seeing it updated! Thank you so very much for all your hard work!

Ooooo Haru! This is a very depressed atmosphere. I can not wait for Naruto to come back... I miss the fluffy one soo much!

Congratulations on the 100th chapter! It's still as great as it always!
I didn't mean anything when I pointed out about that -kun suffix. I know it's just a matter of a custom or whatever.
I'm glad that Ran turned out to be such a smart and actually great kid.
I'm looking forward to at least another 100 chapters!
Thank you for sharing this story with us!

im surprised that no one could see the pattern going on here.and kiba is pretty good at seeing things. shika i can understand with how busy he is but not kiba.