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Congratulations on 100 chapters. I love this story so much. Thank you for writing it.

Congradulations on 100 chapters!!! Good job. I am happy the Haru has found a friend in Ran. I think Ran is right Haru just needs to tell Shika that he loves him & give him a big hug. That was all I wanted to to do this whole chapter was give Shika a big hug. I loved the interaction betweem Ran, Iruka & Kakashi, they are a cute family. Keep up the good work. <3 HUGS!!!

The little tike is growing:) I'm with Ran I wish he would tell Shik he loves him that might help him feel a little better. I wonder is the little princess a type genius to? That how she know how to pull all the big boys strings:) Time will tell huh?! ^_^

I love that Haru and Ran are such good friends but I am also amazed that Sumiko is able to manipulate so many smart people. Shikamaru is in crisis right now so he is excused but Neji, Kiba and Sasuke are all being fooled by a small child. She may be smart but she is still a child like any other. Kiba is really sleeping on the job. He has not to our knowledge talked to Biwako about Haru and that is mostly because his time is being consumed by Sumiko. I am still very worried that Haru's tablet and his forays into the data streams are not great things. I am so disappointed in Sasuke by his absence in with the kits now that Kiba is back and his disregard for Haru's opinion or feelings right now. Haru may be somewhat of a trouble maker but he is not a liar. He didn't have to believe Haru immediately but there should have been some consideration. I think it's good that Haru is trying to form bonds with other adults but I don't want his relationship with Shika to suffer for it. I hope either he or Ran speaks up sometime soon. Good chapter, there is so much food for thought here.

That's your friend right there.

Looks like you're working on a milestone review point. Congratulations on penning an outstanding fanfic!

poor Kiba. while they're glad he's back, he's sure been dumped inn at the deep end this time. i hope he finds time for Haru.

WHAT IS WRONG WITH HARU?!?!?!?!?!?! I hope it isn't something serious, and that he's not resenting Sasuke for it. Have the other children seen the signs of Haru's withdrawal from the group? I wonder if Kiba will find out that Haru has made his own crystal in Ran's rm, since he said that Haru wansn't the time to crawl around in the dark....MAKE THE CONNECTION MIGHTY KIBA! I am SO glad someone is back that can help and take some LOADS off the crew. These guys were not meant to function as anything other than fighters/commanders, housekeeping/babysitting is not part of their job description and it is taking the negative toll of a lifetime from them. Hopefully Haku is next or Iruka. I want Naruto to fully recover but I feel like that is not going to happen so I am mentally preparing myself so either way I will be okay with the decision. I hope Shika gets better but I know that won't happen unless Sasuke really SEES or Naruto wakes up and uses his insight.

p.s just wanted to say the review pages are catching up to your chapters ^__^

ja ne till next time and keep up the good work

I love how Kiba is so dedicated - I wonder whether as a dog-hybrid, he must be loyal to someone (After Amachi he chose the growing fetus's? And now the children?)
Or maybe he just loves them too much?
Or both?

@u@
Anyway, this chapter was awesome.

It all seems so overwhelming. The survivors had been coping as best they could, and it's hard to see Kiba being so critical, but that is what is best about this story. It's so realistic. Thanks for all your hard work, I look forward to more as always.

kiba is back and the household will start to go back to normal a little more, kiba is an important person in the nursery. what is haru doing ?? love this story, craving for more ... see you soon