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I feel so bad for Shika. Even if he had linked Deidara with Orochimaru there was no way he could predict that they would bomb Terrasade. Everything about Pein's group was staunchly against hurting purebreds and Orochimaru would rather cut off his arm than damage Naruto. And the truth is that it does not matter how tight you have your security. If someone is determined enough, has enough time and resources, and (most importantly) isn't super concerned about collateral damage then there is no security that is unbreakable or cannot be circumvented. Now Shika is going to feel all guilty and tear himself to pieces.

Hopefully it can be caught in time because that could have a ripple effect on the rest of the crew in morale and efficiency. Of all the times that Shika could really use a Naru hug this is it. Maybe Itachi would be able to give him some perspective. If there is anyone who is well versed in taking things in stride and using them to power his focus it is Itachi.

You had me crying at the end. Someone needs to comfort Shika. Someone needs to remind Shika that he is only human and can't anticipate everything. I am glad that you are back to updating twice a week but don't over do it. Keep up the awesome writing. <3 HUGS!!!!

hopefully the bonding moment between them will help. Both of them are stretched right now... and damn, I hope Naru recovers, it's just not the same without him. They need him.

hoho poor haru and shika, genius can't predict futur, new things happen all the time. It's hard but you must accept it !! love this story , see you soon

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You have no idea how much JOY i felt when finding this site was 40-odd chapters ahead.
It was like CHRISTMAS+BIRTHDAY+EVERYTHING.

That was so real! Haru not telling everything because he wasn't asked the right question:) Yes that is real parenthood! Sasuke handle the hold thing well:) Just maybe this will reach one of his sons and a right chose will be made. Thank you for putting my world back in the right orbit by posting today:) Now I know what day of the week it is:) The title said a mouth full. It's cute and sad the way Shika and Haru are setting together. Great Queen of the Naruto Space Universe I loved ^_^

awww! Poor shika and Haru.. So sad... >.<. Can't wait for the next chapter Mannah-san

Chapter 98 broke my heart.

We need to get Naruto right again.

I think Naruto would be completely devastated to have implants. He would never say it but the feelings would be there. The running and fighting would never be the same. Any who back to the kits we finally see some more personality from them. Kuuya has some planning ability. Kazuki is a gamer, they are just growing up so fast. I wanna kno what papa is going to do to them and how he found out. Was it the yips?

Ja ne till next time and keep up the good work

heh, busted! but you gotta give credit wher it's due. Inovative little things.