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person roro237
schedule July 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh Space Queen I misses you so much! I understand the reasons but we've been spoiled for so long it's just hard not reading you on Wednesday. I felt like something was missing and it was YOU!!!! I get such a kick out of Udon calling it his rod:) I love that! I never thought that Moegi had went to see C-san. C-san was special. I laughed when Moegi realize even Haru hadn't mess with the tank buttons:) That boy is something else:) The second lunch was very interesting! I bet you know what little thing touched me the most?! Sasuke and the litter!! I loved it!!! He's being such a good Papa. To-chan will be so happy when he fines out:) Oh Great Queen of the Naruto Space Universe that was fantastic! Getting to know more about Moegi and maybe the start of her relationship with Udon. They are both hero's to me in the ways they helped the family in their time of need. ^_^
schedule July 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
talk about having your eyes opened. Udon may be simple but he's not stupid. Now all he's gotta do is sell the benifits that they could bring to the rest of the scavangers.
I like how Moegi has grown.
person Aflyingmonkey123
schedule July 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Its really interesting to have Moegi's perspective of things. Poor Udon. XD
Can't wait for the nest chapter. :D
person Dorkchic
schedule July 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You have to feel a little bad for Udon. He now has the conflict between what he feels is his home and the home he might make for himself. Also between what he feels are his duties and the life he now wishes he could have. What is incredibly sad is that he is being seduced by the most basic of needs- food and cleanliness. I hope that he realizes that he does not and should not have to choose. That is not wrong to want to better your situation and if he somehow did manage to join Uchiha then he most likely would still be able to take care of his people in sublevel C or work with the hospice (maybe as a liason) or he could realize that there are so many more people he could help should he decide to broaden his horizons a bit. He is exactly the sort of person that belongs in Uchiha and Kakashi (having learned his lesson wiht Iruka) would say that he is glue rather than another tool.
person SunaoTsuji
schedule June 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
chapter 95. hahahahahah! i would love to read exactly what the kits and children were singing. thanks so much for the update even though you are busy with little time. it's greatly appreciated. hope to read more from you soon!
schedule June 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG I wonder if Haru's doings will result in something extremely good or some tragedy? I love his relationship with Kazu-chan. It screams to be 'romantic' in the future. Technically they are not related so it should be ok... right?
Thank you for every moment with Iruka in it.
schedule June 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This reminds me of all the things I did that I wasn't suppose to as a child(all because I was curious). And poor Sasuke. I just want to hug him and tell him everything will be alright.
person richon
schedule June 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ohoo itachi is marvelous, love the way he treat shika ... haru wha are you doing?? Love this story, see you next week
person angelj232000
schedule June 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Another awesome chapter. I can't wait until Haku is un-tanked. How is Itach handling Haku being injured? I am so glad that Iruka is doing so well. I hope that Huaru gets caught, he really should not be making his own network. Keep up the awesome work <3 HUGS!!!
person cynaga
schedule June 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
"Haru almost said no. He wanted the network so much. He was so pleased about his plan. He knew that including Kazuki made it more likely they would be found out.

Then it clicked. Kazuki was more important than the network. He should not need Ran to tell him that. He hugged Kazuki and smiled a thank you to Ran."


{{{Haru-kun}}} ♥