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by mannahpierce

schedule June 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Day 14 of 105. And so it goes...
person Dorkchic
schedule June 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I am happy about several things in this chapter. First is that Haru managed to prioritize his brother's happiness and realise that he should not need Ran to point it out to him. Maybe he will be more aware and concerned about this in the future. Haru also managed to recognise some of his physical limitations and, by extention, what someone like Kazuki contributes. It will help him learn to value things other than what is happening in his head or with his plans. Maybe he will also put more effort into his physical training so as not be a hinderance to others should the situation arise. The fact that Haru appreciated the fact that they functioned well as a team is a very good sign for the future in that he sees that it is not just what 'he' can do, but what 'they' can do.

That last bit at the end with the Ninkin's crew was priceless. I have to wonder whether Kakshi has seen it, or if it something that Iruka is keeping for personal amusement. Itachi and the elite fighters would probably also get an endless supply of joy from it. Still hoping that one day they will get to meet their idol.
person roro237
schedule June 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the trip to Tarrasade:) I have had family issues this morning and I was just now able to go to Tarrasade. I have to tell you I misses you on Wednesday! I know I'm being a spoiled brat:) This chapter was nice and long it allow me to be there as usual! Watching the boys with the cables. Listening to what Shika was trying to do was wOw crazy! I'm glad big brother was able to step in and made him get some sleep. Secretly I have always had a thing for Itachi:) I don't know what to say about Haru-chan!? I only hope To-chan and Kiba will be there by the time he needs them because I believe he's going to do something that will need adult help getting out of. Thank goodness Iruka-sensei is half way back Sasuke needed that:) Space Queen I loved it ^_^
person SidonieStarr
schedule June 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Itachi in black nail polish ... that's hot.
schedule June 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That sneaky little trio. I wonder if they'll be able to keep it up when attention is focused on them one more.
It's good for Sas to laugh cause he's so tired and so is Shika. In fact, all the adults are so exhausted and caring for the kids as well is going to make them more so. At the same time, i understand why they need the kids around.
It's a delicate balancing act...
lol, he might have to actually pay attention to credit affairs for a while and sell off a few planets... that's sooooo Shika.
schedule June 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Kakashi is so sweet and sexy. He kind of teases poor Iruka... but in a good way. So, the kids are back and planning to take care of Sasuke... oh man...
It's all great but I must say it's sad that there will no more Wednesday's updates. It ruins my agenda.... Tuesday-Bleach, Wednesday-Iteration, Thursday - Naruto Friday-end of work and weekend and Saturday- another Iteration! But one chapter a week is still really great. it's the only fanfic with regular updates.
Oh and I'm not sure if had already thanked you for not killing Iruka... so THANK YOU!
schedule June 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
What on earth is Haru planning? Whatever it is it can't be good. That child is on the verge of being an evil genius. Speaking of evil genius's I do believe that Deidra is in a lot of trouble. I'm pretty sure Orochimaru is gonna kill him for almost killing bara's hybrid.
person SunaoTsuji
schedule June 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 89-94. Woo i've finally caught up! great work keeping these chapters coming and i'm looking forward to what Haru as up his sleeves in having Ran unpodded. Interesting enough was how smooth you made Udon's responses to the journalist about what his thoughts were. it would have been difficult for me to put the correct words together.

even though your updates are going to be slow coming due to work and other responsibilities, i'll be looking forward to your updates as your chapters are written. thank you so much for the updates and i hope to read more from you as you write. greatly appreciate it!
person Alleya
schedule June 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Don't stress yourself on chapters, when its ready it will be ready. I'm so glad you posted this story. I look forward to your next chapter. Thanks for the update
schedule June 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
haru you little terror. What are you up to? Still, if he's anything like his Da serious things are going to happen... and i bet it will involve the zetsues.