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take your time... don't feel obliged to put them up if you need to put it aside for a bit. While I'd prefer you kept going (this is great stuff) you need to take care of you and we'll accept our up dates whenever you can give them.

Tee Hee...How wise of Haru to figure out how to get Ran unpodded! I can't wait to read about Iruka getting to see the ninken video! Also...real life happens, and is much more important than updating. Don't worry about us. I'm sure we'll all survive. You've spoiled us with frequent updates for so long. Just make sure you take good care of yourself. As always, I love the story and I look forward to the next installment.

thank for the warning, hope your job situation will be less stresfull soon!!! hooh haru what did you do to ran ??? you are not a good boy !! see you next week

Which begs the immediate question of what did Haru do to Ran's pod to make it appear that it was malfunctioning. It is bizarre that I feel proud of Haru for taking initiative to get things done while everyone is distracted while at the same time being ashamed of him for using everyone's grief as a cover. I guess we can only wait to see how far he carries it before we determine if it is really good or bad. At some point he has to learn some limits and the ability to self-impose some rules (be they moral, societal, or familial). In effect, to learn right from wrong. And if he never is given the opportunity to exercise judgement then he will never develop any.

[ch 94] delightful!

Publish when you are ready. We will wait.

Iruka would have preferred more kisses but being fed pieces of fruit by a naked Kakashi had its good points. So did being gently washed, stroked dry with a towel and having his hair brushed.

OMFG!!!!!

Space Queen don't stress ok. We've been spoiled with two chapter a week. And just like To-chan and Papa's kids ok not like Haru we will just look forward to Saturday's with you! With big smiles ok?! I would like for you to be happy with what you post. The title did speak to me. I thought it was Sasuke's plans for unpoding the kids. But at the end I think it is Haru plans. What the heck that boy could be planing I'm afraid to guess! He was thinking to devil est! The sexy movements of Kakashi for Iruka-sensei was nice:) I loved Hoshi's idea of them taken care of Papa and Papa's reaction ^_^

YAY!!!!!! I got my Iruka chapter. I hope things calm down for you sooner rather then later. I will miss the 2 postings a week but your sanity is far more important. I need you to be able to write if I want amazing fic. So relax & keep up the good work. <3 HUGS!!

I hope the stress will let up soon. Stressful situations tend to cause authors to abandon writing. Get rest and take care.

While I am happy to see Iteration updated so frequently it is not a necessity for you to update quite so often if you are not up to it or ready to do so. We won't stop reading if you update just twice a month or once a month. So don't stress yourself out trying to do so. I enjoyed the chapter, it was interesting to see Sasuke with the children. I am very worried about what Haru will be doing in this time of "freedom." I hope he doesn't bring harm to himself or anyone else with his extracirricular activities. He is too smart for his own good sometimes and I can only hope that Shikamaru and or Kakashi is smart enough to curttail his activities. I also hope they catch on to his using Ranmaru to do whatever he wants. I can only see bad things coming our way if Haru is left unsupervised. It was nice to see Iruka and his thoughts, I also like how you manage to keep the losses they have suffered, fresh by letting us see it from different points of view.

Great chapter as always and once again don't burn yourself out trying to get chapters out. I would rather wait a while and have a great chapter than a rushed one.