rate_review Reviews

It's okay Mannah-san. This story is awesome and sometimes life just gets in the way. Authors are peoples too so I understand. I really liked the chapter, can't wait for more! :D

Hi! Sorry for not being there! Those assholes cut down my internet access and somehow I can't go to AFF from work. It's fine with FF.net but AFF seems too dangerous for the firewall of our company software... it sucks really.

But NOW I'm BACK! reading and reviewing! I just discovered that I don't like Inari... and it's not about his str8 relationship. I didn't like him even when he was with Kono and I thought that he doesn't deserve Konohamaru....

It's amazing that they all are coping so well with everything that had happened. Especially Sasuke... and Shika. I thought he would miss Naruto more... But maybe 'Uchiha' is just that strong.....

Oh I loved crew Ninken! I'm wondering about what out kind of crews(and who may be in them) that there are allied with Uchiha.

Woohooo the hunt for Orochimaru is ON!! This story gets better every time I read it. I can't wait for more.

I'm glad more help has arrived. Theey could use it.
It's nice to hear from them again... even under such crappy circumstances.

Yay another chapter! Can't get enough of your writing. This latest chapter is giving me something to think about. How will it all proceed?

Wow! I just love how you introduced Pakkun and the other ninken. Can't wait to see how that develops. I guess one of the reasons this story is so good, is because it doesn't just focus on one or two couples. Like all good stories, it has an entire world of charcters, whose individual stories, weave the fabric of the tale. Well done :) as always :)
Aloha

I was away too long. It was almost like I was reading a new story, so much went on. The line about nerd's convention made me giggle. I like how Kakashi can still be surprised, about the news of the Snuffers I mean. Thanks for updating!

This may be my favorite Naruto fanficton of all time. Love it! And I squeeed with joy at the appearance of Pakkun and crew. Lol that Kakashi is their hero. Looking forward to more.

It is totally awesome that you included Kakashi's pack! I do hope at some point that he will get the chance to personally interact with them - it would mean the world to them and their reactions would probably embarass Kakashi at first (which Iruka might enjoy!). I feel so bad for Inari right now. He obviously cares for Tayuya, but I get the impression that he does not love her and is kind of struggling with what to do. On top of that he (and several of the elite fighters) has lost his sounding board in C-san. Maybe he can talk to Iruka about it and get some perspective and Iruka would get to feel like he is contributing. I hope Kisame and especially Itachi are doing ok after what happened to Haku. I kind of hope that Itachi gets to be the one finally put Orochimaru down for good since he thought he had last time and was personally raped more than once by the creepy little slug. I have to wonder how pissed Oro was when he found out that Naruto was almost killed in the process. They might not have to torture Dei to death because Oro might very well beat them to it.

It is sad to see Shikamaru so stressed (even if he has very good cause) and it was nice that he got to spend some quality time with the Zetsus. Maybe spending some time with Haru after the children are de-podded will help give him some perspective about become the primary caregiver for his little sister. Who knows - maybe Haru will have some insight or ideas about what is going on or input on how to proceed. I am already feeling bad for Sasuke having to deal with his children's sorrow and confusion when they find out about Naruto.