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person angelj232000
schedule June 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!! Iruka is on the mend. Kakashi better be on his best behavior. Now time to find out how Haku is doing. Please tell me he is doing well. He needs to get back to Itachi & Kisame. Can't wait for my next fix (chapter) this is so like a drug now. Keep up the awesome work. <3 HUGS!!!
person richon
schedule June 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
love the idear of the group of canine hydrid who prefer kakashi!! i image myself what they look like and it's funny. love the story !!!
person roro237
schedule June 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Queenie you had me going with the title but it all became clear:) Perfect! When I seen the title I didn't know what to expect! You know me I was nervous thinking something with Naruto went wrong:) (sorry) I know better than to second guess you:) I just love the new editions! Pakkun and the crew!! The kicker that made me laugh was that Kakashi is their hero:) Inari breaking down instead of Tayuya was so sweet. C-san will be misses in a lot of ways mind and body. I'm glad Iruka-sensei is getting better. Thank you for my trip to Tarrasade! I have my ticket for the next departure ^_^
person lonelylulaby
schedule June 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
It must totally suck for the maple crew to go out on a mission then get a message that half the crew has died and that they are needed back. I'm starting to wonder if Inari is made to be with anyone, maybe he's just suppose to be a loyal member of new Uchiha without any lovers. I liked gettin an inside look into Inari's head. I was starting to forget about them, they have been gone for so long. And then, PAKKUN! didn't know he was goin to be in here. Cant wait for Saturday.

ps I'M STILL HERE ENJOYING YOUR AWESOME WORK ^__^

ja ne till next time and keep up the good work
person MikaSamu
schedule June 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Another terrific chapter! I love how you show the entire extended family pulling together to help one another, even admist their grief (and perhaps in part because of the need to take some form of action), and despite the absense of the queens. The fully realized characters, each of whom has not only admirable strengths but also corresponding weaknesses make this story utterly addictive. I can't help but muse on the concept of leadership in its various forms in these last few chapters. It is absolutely critical to make "right" decisions, as Kakashi realizes Sasuke has done; but it is also necessary to step in and take additional responsibilities when needed while somehow still taking care of your own responsibilities and your loved ones, as Neji is doing; to care and have empahty for others but be able to coldly analyze what is needed for the greater good as we see Shikamaru doing; to learn from one's own mistakes, hear different perspectives -- even those contrary to one's instincts or training and use that information to make better decisions, and always to care for those in your responsibility even if you need to put aside your own grief and fear to do so, as we see Kakashi, Itachi, Chouza, and possibly Asuma doing. I'm rather grateful, not for Naruto's, Iruka's, and Haku's injuries, but their absence. Naruto tends to outshine the other characters with his ability to create a changed, and better, perspective (even while sometimes his instincts and need to provide 100% protective support to Sasuke can be a weakness). In his and the others thankfully limited absence, we have the opportunity to see their partners strenghts and weaknesses all the more clearly -- and they shine as well. I particularly loved Kakashi's walking around to check on everyone, and avoid the emptiness of his room. The return of "sensei" in Sasuke's address (and Shikamaru's) and mother's attitude was a relief -- even if the two might still misunderstand, in part, the other's motives in the gym, it shows the strength of their relationship. It is also wonderfully true to life as we often have misunderstandings that are never fully resolved, but need not be for healthy relationships to remain strong.
schedule June 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I fell a couple of chapters behind but this was a nice pick-me-up at the end of a long week.
Keep up the hard work and if you need to take a week off, I think all your fans will survive... I think...
But as always the story is perfection covered in awesome sauce! Waiting for more--
schedule June 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I almost feel sorry for Orochimaru....almost;)
person v
schedule June 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I apologize for not reviewing the last two chapters,everyone seemed at such a loss and not themselves at all so I was really waiting to see how they would begin again. I'm very glad that sasuke is going to unpod the children..I think seeing how they each handle this situation will help to define their personalities even more. I was wondering how this would affect In and En and their relationship with Uchiha so I can't wait to see more of their interaction with the crew. Neji has really stepped up and I think we're really starting to see how strong he can be...a little curious about tatsuji..since we don't know that much about him except that he might possibly be insane, but loyal....sooo I can't wait to read the next chapters to come...and what I find most surprising is when the bombs went off..Deirdre didn't cross my mind but as soon as his name was mentioned my thoughts flew back to him and the Warren...very nicely done.. :) ....and I hate orchimaru..he sucks...lol.
schedule June 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
it was interesting that it was Kurenai rather than Asuma who bought it in this one. A nice twist.
There is so much to think about, so much going on... and I like Shika's views on the Snuffers. no more... ever.
I do worry about that guy though, the soft spoken one. Will they need another like c san to help... though that would hurt to. Maybe a similar idea but a differnt approach? I don't know.
At any rate, they're coping for now.
I hope things get better for the Zetsues and they find someone who'll accept them both.
person satterb
schedule June 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awwww! Thank goodness Kakashi is learning to accept that this is "New Uchiha". Thanks for all your hard work.