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by mannahpierce

schedule June 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm so sorry that Sasuke is going through this...I'm sorry for them all. This is major deep.
person Dorkchic
schedule June 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I hope Kakashi, Shika, Neji, Kisame, and Itachi help Sasuke reign in and focus his rage. If they don't then things could get out of hand very quickly and Sasuke would probably never forgive himself if he damaged or killed the wrong person or persons in his need for vengence. Excellent chapter and I loved Udon.
person angelj232000
schedule June 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I am glad to see people moving on. I can't wait to see who the bomber is. Hope Sasuke gets em!!!!!!!! Keep it up I need to know what happens next & I can`t wait fore all the injured to be taken out of the tanks & for the reunions to begin. YAY!!! getting back together sex & cuddling. I can`t to read the reunions on Itachi/Kisame/Haku, Kakasi/Iruka & of course Naruto/Sasuke. The anticipation is going to kill me. BIG HUGS for the awesome read.
person roro237
schedule June 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh Space Queen that was breath taking:) I love the fact that it will be on count down-days. 1 of 105. I'm with Shika Udon talk with the news had me choked up to. That was just beautiful:) So these bombs were planed long ago? I'm happy it didn't really have anything to do with Sasuke serving Udon. That was so sweet the way he handle the children of Asma. He knew what they must be feeling. Between me and you I want to hug and squeeze Sasuke and make it all better:) In that motherly way:) It's only day one! He has so far to go. I'm freaking out worse than him:) Oh Great Queen of the Naruto Space Universe ~Bowing~. I loves it ^_^
person Aflyingmonkey123
schedule June 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
And so it begans....This chapter was so so ... saaaaaaaaaaaaad. Everyone was touched someway by the enemy bombing and its just so depressing.. I have to say though I was waiting for sasuke to get angry and I was glad he did. He has to have a drive to find these killers and destroy them... Can't wait for the next chapter (like always)
schedule June 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
And I'm *STILL* crying...
I love Udon. I just want to kidnap him, then hug him and squeeze him and love him forever. I'm so glad he spoke with the media and the public sympathize with their grief. I hope things look up and move forward for Udon and Uchiha.
person SunaoTsuji
schedule June 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
chapter 89? woooo this chapter really put me on edge due to the fact that many ppl were lost and many were hurt. extremely anticipating how the next few dives are going to be. greatly appreciate the update and looking forward to your next chapter!
schedule June 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Just to let you know, while you're reading this review that I'm *still* crying, and my husband is hysterical. But it'll be okay because I love the story and you're going to make everything better like you always do. *nods with certainty* Right?
person lonelylulaby
schedule June 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG, I just cant take it anymore. The destruction is killing me, I ask once again WHO WOULD DO SUCH A THING? At least now I know the reason why Kakashi was acting so mean. Oh Gosh I just cant wait till everyone is well again. Um, I dont know if this was answered but is C-san dead, injured or missing?

ja ne till next time and keep up the good work
person KL
schedule June 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This chapter serves to remind me how much we dont know what kakashi is thinking, even though he gives this one perception of things, in his mind there are many things going on.