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Chapter 87's ending was not fair. I don't want Naruto to die. NOOOOOOOO!!!!!! Please update soon. I don't want to be crying next chapter please don't kill him. God this story is so good. Keep up the great work.

Chapter 86. Udon was so cute!

Chapter 87. "They are only six." i can see the parent's mind of thinking there. and the way you concluded this chappie has me tingled to the bone! i want more! i must know what happens next!

I was gone...eight days...no internet for 5 of them....so happy to be back, have 3 chapters to read..loving Udon, hoping things work out for him, waiting to see if hikaru is alright with his punishment...Sasuke serving tea, Naruto being fabulous..little worried about Kakashi's prediction of trouble. Naruto so funny, worrying about his children and puberty.....THEN..WTF!!! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!! OH GOD!!! NARUTO!!!!!! what about sasuke, the children, shikamaru, Iruka, .....HE CAN'T DIE!! What about Kurenei?? and Choza?? and the others with him??? Tears, Hysteria, relentless re-reading has become my life...please, please, please, don't let him die.

Ah, the cliffhanger. Quite possibly one of the most cruel and effective writing tools known to exist. You use it well, damnit. I've not reviewed in a while but I never miss a chapter. This story has been wonderful. I find myself reading exerts to my husband and best friend as I go even though they don't know what I'm talking about. I hope this is not the beginning of the end for this story, but if it is, I will enjoy and know that the ride has been a truly wonderful roller coaster and fun house and tunnel of love all wrapped up in beautiful words and flowing lines.

Oh my God!!!! All I can ask is please update soon. Thank you for all your hard work on this wonderful story!

Okay... I'm having a 'spaz attack'. I only beg that this is tied up quickly and cleanly. Thank you. :)

OMG!!! I read this chapter last night right before bed. I couldn't sleep! I am so worried about Naruto. Great (but awful!) chapter. Looking forward to the next one stat!

Queenie I'm back today because I've been haunted all day with thoughts of Naruto. I'm scared! What will Sasuke and the children do without him? Will Sasuke feel responsible for this happening? Who's going to tell Sasuke what has happen? You have raise the bar to heights I can't even see! This has been the scariest chapter for me. My heart is still skipping a beat or two but I'm holding on ok! ^_^

Wow - This story goes from warm and fuzzy to thrilling so quickly. I eagerly await every update and I'm sure I'll go into mourning when you move on to other things.

I am crying at the possibilities. Update soon. I can't stand it ;-)