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wow! Team Ebisu together! that was great! even if just for a moment...
I love those moments when someone meets Naruto and Sasuke for the first time. It's always so amazing almost making my eyes water for gods know why....

naru and sasu know how to handle popularity. udon love it !!! want more !! see you soon

before I forget to do this...Thank you for addressing that in your A/N. I'd never heard the speeded up thing and usually if I hear it and think it might be a regional difference I look it up (towards, colour,etc...the editor for reviews is American it seems) I promise I actually started to address that because I noted two issues while I was reading through but that was the one I saw last and I couldn't remember and couldn't refind the second one. I just went along my merry way thinking I misread or missed it or that you were just a ninja editor. The later is slightly less likely considering the hassle people to seem to have uploading edits. I've never dealt with it but I have heard rumors of it's evil. All that being said, each chapter I appreciate more and more your style of writing and character development and thank you for regularly updating, which could be considered insane with how large your story is. I appreciate that. Also, the first time I reviewed was after reading the entire first installment and then everything previously posted for this, so for me to appreciate each chapter your writing style seems unique and kind of awesome to me :)

heh, poor udon. Adaptable as he is how could you not feel overwhelmed by all that. Ah well, at least they gave him floaties before dumping him in at the deep enD. ^^

Chapter 86... Wow. I love Udon. He's trying so hard with his new life. Its so sweet, and I'm proud of him. I laughed so hard at the office visit. I bet Konohamaru disappeared to arrange for Sasuke and Naruto to visit...
I love this story so much and I thank you for working so hard to share it with us all.

I was there walking around! I could understand why Udon was feel exposed in all that openness. And wOw Sasuke-sama servicing tea?! I thought that was fantastic! He's not his father he's a fair and good man not to forget handsome:) I loved that part! And the part where Naruto just walked in yea baby! Sunshine on legs!:) Thank you for my get away from earth to Tarrasade:) Hey the title was so perfect. Great Queen of the Naruto Space Universe I loved it ^_^

Ooooo I do love this story :) Your Udon charcter is great. A very nice addition to the story.

chapter 84-85. haha naruto claiming sasuke. i see me a one shot. XD although chapter 85 was short, it still left me wanting more. :D i'm expecting more updates! greatly appreciate you and ur beta's hard work. thanks a bunch and keep up the great writing!

You always seem to come up with very interesting solutions and I always wonder how much you have planned out in advance. The entire thing is almost as massive as it's space setting. But I also can't help but wonder what the Uchiha run universe will look like a century or two after they're all dead. Many of your plans are constructed to avoid corruption, and would likely work as long as a decent soul was around to enforce it, but there are likely thousands of way for the whole structure to collapse later on...but I'm probably being to realistically oriented since this is fiction :) I just always have to wonder what a little event today will impact in the future and your story is no exception :D. I very much like that Naruto is such a driving force through will-power because that really captures him in the canon, so I wanted to pat you on the back for that. I generally love the way you handle all your characters, especially for some reason, Zetsu. I hate for the first comment I leave in forever to point out flaws but I think speeded up should be sped up unless you were in third person deep POV or something like that.

Awwww! It was so lovely! I really like the way this is going. Thanks for updating. I look forward to more, as always.