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Children-free chapter. Good. One of the greatest thing about this story is that one chapter can be about the every day life and in the next we're on the verge of war or something. And then just when we start to miss the kids or one of the characters they appear with something new and interesting. Everything happens in a way that can never be boring. A new character once in a while, good times and bad times. It's all so skillfully 'designed'...
I can imagine that updating this story twice a week is a big challenge but still I hope you'll never stop. I can't imagine it ever ending.
you are doing something really amazing and I'm really happy that you share it with us! Thank you!

yes shik you had a wonderfull idear, but you are not the voice in the ear for nothing !!! udon start a new aventure, love the concept.
loce this story!! see you soon

~Bowing~ Thank you for all your hard work:) I don't know of anyone else posting twice a week less long for how long you have been doing it! You're the Queen of Naruto Space Universe hands down:) The tittle was dead on but I didn't guess right this time. I'm so happy for Udon. You know I love Naruto more all the time and his honesty with the ladies was sO Naruto like. How can you ever say no to that man?! I loved every word of this chapter ^_^

They're reaklly going to make it happen. There will probably be problems, but change is a coming. No more dying alone, abandoned children. At least, not there.

I very much approve of the punishment for Hi-chan, I think it was firm and because he's been with his litter for the start of his life it might show him a little bit of what Haru felt like without his family around him, since we haven't really been privy to Hikaru's thought process I am curious to see how he will react to being isolated from his brothers, sisters, and Kiba and to have his To-chan and Papa disappointed and angry with him. Lets hope it helps. Sasuke's and Haru's discussion was very touching also, they both have lovely hearts. I can't wait for the ladies of Tarrasade to get up close with Uchiha, should be hilarious. Lol :)

The amount of control that must have been required not to yell at him for calling Haru a traitor must have been staggering. Sounds like someone needs to learn a valuable lesson about not always being right or not always winning. That being you usually learn more from your failures than your successes.

snerk... Thingie... bwhahahaha. And in Uchiah blue with fan no less. *dissolves into giggles. Where do you come up with this stuff?
The time out room is a very good idea and the kids as distraction, equally good.
"we are Uchiah," *huggles Haru. What a great kid.

i love chapters like this one. I know that it would be boring if it was too often like that but I really enjoyed this. this was great!

Oh Great Queen of the Naruto Space Universe that was such a 'Yea Baby' chapter on so many levels:) I couldn't wait to fine out what they were going to do to Hi-chan. That was a good call for his punishment. Baby boy loves swimming in the tub that is so cute:) Ok now for the 'thingy' yea baby! WoW I love it:) The Uchiha crest on it was great yea baby:) The best part was that they both thought it was fine but it would never replace the wild or soft side of Naruto yea baby! I love those boys so much!! Marvelous chapter I loved it ^_^

love shika's solution for naru... what happen to hikaru ?? poor children they will have to behaved and charmed the old laddies. see you soon with more ...