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May 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 83. Ouch. This is going to be as hard on Haru as it will be on Hikaru once Naruto and Sasuke talk to them. Still, I'm curious as to how the conversation will go and how it will be approached.
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May 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god!!! What are Naruto & Sasuke going to do about Hikaru and Haru. Those two always had their ups & downs but this is very bad. I can't wait to see what will happen. I want more Iruka & Ran, they do seem to be doing better.
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May 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ah, you update too often for me to review. That's not a bad thing! I love each and every chapter you write. I wish I had enough time to review all of them is all. Once again the story is going strong, and I wish it would last forever. It is a wonderfully complex universe you have written and there is always something new to discover. I might have said this before but I don't mind repeating it. And I hope you don't mind hearing it again!
I love when characters in a story discover new things, and it's not very often that I read something like it. Just one of my quirks, I guess. So it's a nice surprise when I am reading a story and find it there. I have encountered it several times with your stories and can imagine myself right there beside them. I have a curious nature, or so it seems.
One thing about writing with the characters with Naruto is that there are many characters to draw from and many new situations to encounter. I'll never know when you are about to introduce a new character or who it may be. But that is the joy of discovery. I hope you continue writing in good spirit!
I love when characters in a story discover new things, and it's not very often that I read something like it. Just one of my quirks, I guess. So it's a nice surprise when I am reading a story and find it there. I have encountered it several times with your stories and can imagine myself right there beside them. I have a curious nature, or so it seems.
One thing about writing with the characters with Naruto is that there are many characters to draw from and many new situations to encounter. I'll never know when you are about to introduce a new character or who it may be. But that is the joy of discovery. I hope you continue writing in good spirit!
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May 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ooooooooommmmmmmmgggggggggggg wow its been ages since I last wrote I review (I've had a bit to catch up on since the burdern of school) OMG!!! TOO EPIC!!
but since it would take too long to review alll the chapters I've read let's just stick with this one
GO KIBA!! YEAH!!.. Though I still don't trust Konan...
hmm Hikaru= bad egg.. I see trouble in the future and forget a pissed Naruto, its a pissed Sasuke I'm worried about, though I think its time for some tuff loving and whip out the his father's stern side cause seriously, Hikaru just feels like he's gonna cause more trouble than Haru going into the data streams
damn I love this fic!
but since it would take too long to review alll the chapters I've read let's just stick with this one
GO KIBA!! YEAH!!.. Though I still don't trust Konan...
hmm Hikaru= bad egg.. I see trouble in the future and forget a pissed Naruto, its a pissed Sasuke I'm worried about, though I think its time for some tuff loving and whip out the his father's stern side cause seriously, Hikaru just feels like he's gonna cause more trouble than Haru going into the data streams
damn I love this fic!
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May 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
oh dear... how are they going to manage this piccadilo. Really, that kid needs to think before he opens his mouth.
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May 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG when Naruto will get his hands on Hikaru there will be one purebred Uchiha less.... No, just kidding, but Hi-chan is so bratty. It scary to think what kind of person he would be in the future. Especially if he is to be (maybe he isn't but just IF) the next head of the Uchiha. He acts like the only child, which is amazing considering how big was their litter.... ^_^
Thank you for putting some Naruto moments in the chapter! I missed him.
Thank you for putting some Naruto moments in the chapter! I missed him.
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May 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
poor haru, he must be so cross, hopefuly naru will make it better. hikaru will have a big speech. love this story see you soon
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May 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I was surprised we didn't continue with Udon but I am happy to see the outcome of the Hana and Konan decision. It was also nice to see things from Kiba's pov. His relationship with Chouza is still sweet, even though I always think of him as Chouji. Has Chouji been introduced? I guess not but it would be interesting, maybe he could be Chouza's bastard child or something. This new development with Hi chan and Ha chan is worrying. I know that they aren't the best of friends but it makes me worry that Hikaru would both think something like that about his brother and then actually say it as well. I can't wait to see how it is resolved.
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May 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Poor Hi-chan! LOL Kids will be kids. I remember saying alot of things I really didn't understand. Oh well....I can't wait to see how Naruto and Sasuke handle this one. I love this story, Thank you for all your talent!
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May 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
WoW!!! It was very nice being with Kiba for morning:) But OMG what in the world is up with the future leader of the Uchiha?!:) I'm looking forward to fining out what his reason for saying that to his brother. This is why you are the Great Queen of Naruto Space Universe! You have all those people to figure out:) And by the way you do a damm good job:) I know I haven't said it lately but I love your story ^_^