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Kids can be cruel little shits, can't they?

I like getting to know Kiba more and more..he's such a big part of the everyone's life, and I did forget the importance of "Guardian". So I enjoyed seeing his natural compassion and willingness to take care of people, even though I don't think he recognizes it as such.lol
I like the snippets of him and Choza too. Choza seems to know him very well so thats a plus :) As for Hi-chan and Ha-chan's fight...I'm a little worried about Hi-chan's personality, to say something like that to his recently kidnapped and returned brother seems particularly vicious, I know that he is still a child and we say the worst things to the people we love. I hope Sasuke and Naruto are able to sort it all out, but in the end I guess each child has to develop their own personality and have their own faults, dammit...they can't all be adorable. :) Still not sure if I care for Konan, thinking she should be happy she's even alive...

is it wrong that i had a little chuckle cause Tsuneo didnt get that spoonful? Anywho, all i can say about this chapter is WOW there was so much going on that i just dont know where to start. When Yuki said Hikaru called Haru a cat i was like O_o y would he get angry because of that? Then it was explained. I thought Hikaru had gotten better about the teasing. I dont even know how Sasuke and Naruto are going to deal with this latest one. ONCE AGAIN I MUST SAY U ARE THE GREATEST!!

ja ne till next time and keep the awesomeness coming

see you don't go on the computer for a weejk or so and there's chapters everywhere!
it's nice though reading them in one go:)

your character Udon is a natural born medic/researcher, great character.
and I'm really happy your getting into the plot and fleshing out your worlds again.
always interesting twist.

thank you.

very cloak and dagger - cool!

there seems to be a real mystery behind the pregnant girl.
the story line is getting thick again:)

you put so much thought in a short amount of time to really
make your worlds and characters, not only your own, but well rounded
and fleshed out. terrific stand alone characters. kudos.

thank you.

beautiful, sympathetic character, Udon and we look forward to his rise with Uchia:)
thank you.

I feel so bad for Udon. Am I a bad person for wishing something nasty and possibly humiliating happens to his aunt?

Aww Udon! I cried for him! His life is so not fair. He shouldn't have gone back. :(

Awwww! Poor Udon. I was hoping for better for him. Ya know, a real Cinderella story. As always, this is still great, and if you're writing, then it's part of the story. LOL Thanks for all your hard work. I really look forward to your updates.

Poor Udon... Well, I guess I'm glad that the child has a family after all and is actually wanted... Good for him!
And now saving lower levels of Terrasade depends on Shika. He is so amazing in this story. I always felt connection with him because of his 'mendokusena' attitude, but here he is just brilliant.
I wonder if Uchiha will recruit another genius - Zetsu... ? We'll see.