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Awwww. I hoope things get better for Udon... and are we ever going to have Ino show?

I hope Udon actually takes his chance soon and goes to see "Angela". He has had a chance to see what it is like on the other levels now and now that he is back home and has it uncles words in his mind, maybe he will think about where he wants his future to go. Now that Uchiha has found out who the baby belongs to they may have found a solution to their orphanage. it was a beautiful idea to set it in memory of the babys mother with a butterfly being the theme. also to have naruto and sasuke on the charity circuit would prove entertaning as well as drama filed. and finally, it is just eating at me that Uchiha is just making such a grand damn gesture for these baby nappers! okay realisticly it was just Konan and Zetsu because Hana was just a servant. But Uchiha is suppoused to be this force to be reckonned with and feared and here are the people that kidnapped their children and threatned their lives and they are "readying rooms and making preparations so that they will be comfortable" Naruto once asked Sasuke what does Uchiha do? evidently nothing. They owe nothing to these people but here they are about to take them in and eventually give them money to relocate. real scary uchiha. what can I say...IM LOVIN IT!!!!! every single time!! even if I want them to make an example out of Konan and Zetsu by just doing SOMETHING besides saying "" welcome to hotel uchiha we hope you enjoy your stay" I absolutely adore this story

I was wondering where Udon was in this story. The idea of scavengers is so disturbing but effective in showing the darker side of space stations. I am always amazed at the way you develop this story. This just doesn't stop getting better.

I'm happy Udon did get some kind words from his Uncle:) I was piss with the way that man talked to Sasuke but I do understand. He was still an ass about it. But actions speak louder than words and Sasuke handled that beautifully. So there is no miss staking he's not like his father. That was a wonderful story within the story or just another day in the life's of Naruto and Sasuke ^_^

don't cry udon, you will be bzck in level 4 quickly. Your oncle is not so bad after all. Naru and kiba have a very good idear. love this story so much , i start to read the beginning again. see you soon

I didn't review the last chapter because I really wanted to wait until this one, I was just as non-plussed as Udon...and a little scared for him. Weird, since he's a new character but I like him :) Its different getting used to everyone being in Tarrasade..but I definitely curious on how them making a home is going to go, especially since Sasuke's memories of his home might not coincide with the reality of it. Naruto seems to be much more level headed about it all, which is a little unexpected but then I'm getting used to their growth as people also. I am curious about how Haku's little family is doing since we haven't seen much from them and how child rearing is going for Itachi, I was worried with mai to raise but when they added sho, a boy, and he was so against having a boy when they were gestating mai, well...just wondering :) Love the story, favorite author, waiting always for more :)

Udon seems a lot like Naruto was in the beginning.

Chapter 80-82. Wooo~ Now that has a nice and different pace for the story. It felt like a "laying in the works" kinda part and I'm throbbing in excitement to see how else Udon will play into Iteration. Thanks for the update and I hope to read more soon.

Holy Crap!! this a is a revelation, totally did not see that coming. I wonder who Udon is related to then. OMG he could come from a rich family. GAH! have I told you recently that you are great? Totally freakin awesome. Anywho my answer to the question of who those men where was answered. This story is totally taking over my life.

ja ne till next time and keep up the good work

OMG! I've missed you! I've been away because of a new job I started and all I could think about for my down time was that I needed to hget back to my favorite fan fiction. Lol. Its been ten chapters and reading them all back to back today was like heaven. I'm so happy to be back. I'll be awaiting the next chapter with open arms. Thanks for sharing your hard work.