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Oh! A surprising chapter, a new character..someone who could help naruto and HDL. If he's brave that is. Udon..I like that name. :)

I was wondering when Udon was going to come in. Moegi and Konohamaru were already part of the Uchiha crew, so I figured it would only be a matter of time before Udon came in. Unfortunately, he still isn't crew, but he does have that coin with Naruto and Sasuke's faces on the sides so maybe there's hope yet. Plus, he's made (brief) contact with Sakura or "Angela". I wonder who the baby is. I have to give Udon props for saving it despite the slummy atmosphere they were living in. The life of a Scavenger sounded to me like being trapped in Hell. Having to watch people suffer and die. It was awful just reading about it; I can't imagine living that. I don't know why Udon would want to continue staying there, especially since his aunt and uncle don't really seem to care that much about him. Anyway, I didn't mean for this to be so long. Great job, and I look forward to the next chapter, Mannah.

UDON!!!!!! I knew there was someone missing. I liked this chapter. I think it's because there was a new person introduced.

ja ne till next time and keep up the good work

I've started to see more confidence in Neji's character..his role is becoming more of his own rather than a side view of Shikamaru's. I am wondering how it will affect his relationships in the future although it has seemed to improve his and Kakashi's :) To tell you the truth, this turn of events have really thrown me for a loop, but I am looking forward to the four "enemies" reaction to Naruto, Sasuke , and the rest of the spacers. Also I'm glad we got to see more of the depth of Naruto's role in HDL, but i'm surprised how calm he was when discussing sasuke's options, but maybe i'm guilty of not realizing how much he's grown also. So I'm excited about the choices and possible scenarios coming up, and obviously O is not just a sicko perv that I thought he was...so that is worrisome. Although........ since I am continuously worried about Naruto and the kits life span....someone trying to live forever...could be of some use. lol :)

You know I never thought I would say that I missed Zetsu but in this story I did. He's so cute and eager to please. I hope that he and Hana can be incorporated in the Uchiha because I think they are great characters and would be good additions to the family we already have. I hope that we also get to see and Hana's interaction with Naruto, Kiba, and Gaara. I really like her and hopefully she can be persuaded to leave Konan and stay on.

i love the way naru thing. it's easier to cut the questioningLove this story, see you soon

I actually cried on this one! i love Iruka and his insecurities are killing me. When few chapters back he said that he is afraid that Kakashi will replace him with someone else it was... really sad. If I were Asuma I would hug Iruka instead of laughing at him!!! And I started to wonder what would Kakashi have to do to make him feel... equal... and I think he would have to let Iruka fuck him. Or maybe it wouldn't change anything because Iruka just IS that good natured and wonderful and all... (I hope my English sentences are understandable...sometimes I don't know...) ...and maybe he wouldn't even want to...! But I still wonder, is there a cure for this 'attitude' of his....?
-melissen

Ok, Garner Parrad is the best! Who would expect him to so cool?! I laughed so hard at the 'pastry-part'...
Thank you! This was fun!

So Kakashi did not say magic words but I guess what he had said was enough.
And now I have to wait for another chapter. Or maybe I'll just go back to the beginning of 'In the Cold of Space...'
Naruto and Sasuke were so cute back then... I still hope you'll write another story from the Silver Leaf one day...
Thank you for this amazing story.

Sasuke thinks too hard. LOL I love that Naruto can be so detached when he needs to be. I like that he's multifaceted. Just being volatile and passionate isn't really feasible. Great partnerships rely on both partners to complement each other. Sasuke and Naruto definetly do that in this story. They're not just both one dimensional. Thanks for all your hard work on this story. I love it.